天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“runs”应为“rains”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，避免冗余，使用正确的词汇表达天气状况。

示例: I live in Sydney, where the weather is usually sunny even though it's almost winter. I enjoy living here because the climate is pleasant. It sometimes rains, but the rain is usually light.

建议: 回答中语法混乱，表达不清晰，且有多处词汇错误。建议使用简单明了的句子表达偏好，并说明原因。

示例: I prefer cold weather because I don't like sweating or feeling uncomfortable. Also, cold weather is better for my skin condition.

建议: 回答不连贯，语法和词汇错误较多，导致意思难以理解。建议用完整句子表达观点，并具体说明原因。

示例: I prefer dry weather because high humidity makes my oily skin worse and causes discomfort.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“tennis scores is outdoor”应为“tennis practice is outdoors”，且“running condition”应为“weather conditions”。建议注意语法和用词准确。

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day because my children play tennis outdoors. I need to know the weather before taking them to practice or going shopping.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议使用简单句子清晰表达观点，并提供具体影响。

示例: I think global temperatures are rising and rainy seasons are longer. This causes ice to melt, which threatens polar bears' habitats.

建议: 回答中有语法和表达错误，句子不够连贯。建议简化句子，明确表达愿望和理由。

示例: Yes, I would love to travel around the world if I had the chance. Experiencing different climates makes each city unique and interesting to explore.

× Now I'm living in Sydney, although it's almost winter time but it's usually sunny and with a good weather.

✓ Now I'm living in Sydney. Although it's almost winter time, it's usually sunny and the weather is good.

句子中“with a good weather”用法不正确，应该用“the weather is good”来表达天气状况。这里涉及到“there be”结构的使用问题。

× It sometimes runs, but then not big.

✓ It sometimes rains, but not heavily.

“runs”应为“rains”，表示下雨。动词形式错误属于单复数问题。

× I like to live in colder area, I don't like to sweat too much and I don't like her the high humidity area.

✓ I like to live in colder areas. I don't like to sweat too much and I don't like the high humidity areas.

“in colder area”应为“in colder areas”，表示复数；“her the high humidity area”语法错误，应为“the high humidity areas”。这里涉及介词和冠词的错误。

× Since he is had perfected space to stay and when I am in stinging on my skin condition is always good.

✓ Since it has a perfect space to stay, when I am in it, my skin condition is always good.

“he is had perfected space”语法错误，代词使用错误，应为“it has a perfect space”；“stinging on”用法错误，应为“in it”。

× I like the weather likely.

✓ I like the weather like that.

“likely”用法错误，应使用“like that”来表达喜欢那样的天气。

× My skin condition is a little bit of oil older so when I am in high humidity.

✓ My skin condition is a little oily, so when I am in high humidity,

“oil older”应为“oily”，形容词形式错误。

× Ditto, my skin condition is getting worse and I can put on. Is some.

✓ Similarly, my skin condition gets worse and I can break out.

句子结构混乱，表达不清，需重组句子使其通顺。

× Yes, I checked the weather every day.

✓ Yes, I check the weather every day.

“checked”是过去式，表示过去动作，句意应为习惯性动作，需用一般现在时“check”。

× My children play tennis and their tennis scores is outdoor.

✓ My children play tennis and their tennis scores are outdoor.

“scores is”主谓不一致，应为“scores are”。

× So when I take them to tennis practice, I need to check the running condition and also I go shopping.

✓ So when I take them to tennis practice, I need to check the raining condition and also when I go shopping.

“running condition”应为“raining condition”，且句子缺少连接词。

× The temperature over the world that he is getting higher and the rainy season is also getting longer, so the.

✓ The temperature all over the world is getting higher and the rainy season is also getting longer, so the

“that he is”错误，应为“is”，主语和动词不一致。

× Ice condition is getting worse and to the polar bear doesn't have a place to live and they'll ostler habitated.

✓ Ice conditions are getting worse, and polar bears don't have a place to live; their habitats are being lost.

句子结构混乱，单复数错误，词汇错误（ostler habitated应为lost habitats），需重组句子。

× Yes, I would love to go around the world if I had to look chance.

✓ Yes, I would love to go around the world if I had the chance.

“had to look chance”错误，应为“had the chance”，过去分词使用错误。

× Different kinds of a weather makes the makes the city different and specific.

✓ Different kinds of weather make the city different and unique.

“makes the makes the”重复错误，且“specific”用词不当，应为“unique”。

× They will be a great experience to explore. Different to the test.

✓ They will be a great experience to explore, different from the test.

句子不完整，表达不清，需合并并调整介词。