天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer wa eigo de shizen ni shite, bunshou no kouzou wo seikaku ni shiyou. Tatoeba, topic sentence de kotae, tsugi ni riyuu ya jissai no jouhou wo tsukete, rensetsu shiyou. Kankyou ni tsuite no hyougen wo motto meikaku ni shiyou suru koto ga taisetsu desu.

示例: The weather in Tokyo is usually sunny, which makes me feel happy and comfortable. When it's sunny, I enjoy going outside to relax and take a walk.

建议: Kotae wa motto rikai shi yasuku, shizen na eigo de kakimashou. Topic sentence de sugu ni kotae, sorekara riyuu ya taiken wo tsukete setsumei shite kudasai. Fuyou na kotoba ya fukuzatsu na hyougen wa sakete, wakari yasui kotoba wo tsukaimashou.

示例: I prefer cold weather because I cannot stand the heat. When it's cold, I can enjoy hot drinks and soups, which make me feel warm and comfortable.

建议: Eigo no bunshou wo shizen ni shite, rikai shi yasui you ni setsumei shite kudasai. Topic sentence de kotae, sorekara riyuu ya taiken wo tsukete, rensetsu shiyou. Fuyou na kotoba ya fukuzatsu na hyougen wa sakete kudasai.

示例: I prefer dry weather because I find it more comfortable than wet weather. In my area, the weather is often hot and humid, so dry days are nicer for me.

建议: Kotae wa motto shizen na eigo de, bunshou no kouzou wo seikaku ni shiyou. Topic sentence de kotae, tsugi ni jikan ya suuji nado no shousai wo tsukete setsumei shite kudasai. Rensetsu shiyou to hanashi ga wakari yasuku narimasu.

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every day, usually twice a day: once in the morning and once before going to bed.

建议: Kotae wa motto rikai shi yasuku, shizen na eigo de kakimashou. Topic sentence de kotae, sorekara jissai no jouhou ya reigai wo tsukete setsumei shite kudasai. Rensetsu shiyou to hanashi ga wakari yasuku narimasu.

示例: I think the climate is getting hotter in recent years. For example, almost every summer, the temperature reaches record highs, which shows global warming is happening.

建议: Eigo no bunshou wo shizen ni shite, rikai shi yasui you ni setsumei shite kudasai. Topic sentence de kotae, sorekara riyuu ya taiken wo tsukete, rensetsu shiyou. Fuyou na kotoba ya fukuzatsu na hyougen wa sakete kudasai.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to go to countries with less rain because I dislike rainy weather and want to enjoy sunny days.

× I like Sunny where I live in Tokyo goes.

✓ I like sunny weather where I live in Tokyo.

The word 'Sunny' should be in lowercase as it is an adjective describing the weather, not a proper noun. Also, 'goes' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The sentence should describe the weather simply as 'sunny'.

× The sun is shining and made me feel.

✓ The sun is shining and makes me feel happy and comfortable.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper verb agreement. 'Made' is past tense but the first clause is present tense. It should be consistent and complete, so 'makes me feel happy and comfortable' fits better.

× Happy and comfortable.

✓ I feel happy and comfortable.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb, making it an incomplete sentence. Adding 'I feel' completes the sentence.

× I prefer cold visit now because.

✓ I prefer cold weather now because.

The word 'visit' is incorrect here; the intended meaning is 'cold weather'. Also, 'now' should be placed appropriately to clarify the time.

× I cannot stand hot weather.

✓ I cannot stand hot weather.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× When it was cold, I. Could ignite on.

✓ When it was cold, I could light a fire.

'Ignite on' is incorrect usage. The correct phrase is 'light a fire' to express making a fire when it is cold.

× I could. B Hotel Ann I could eat.

✓ I could stay at a hotel and I could eat.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'B Hotel Ann' seems to be a mishearing or typo. It should be 'stay at a hotel and I could eat' to make sense.

× Hot things like not be an soup.

✓ Hot things like hot bean soup.

'Not be an soup' is incorrect. The intended phrase is likely 'hot bean soup'. The preposition and article usage is wrong here.

× I prefer drive ISIL because.

✓ I prefer dry weather because.

'Drive ISIL' is a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'dry weather'.

× I found it more comfortable then weather when it is wet.

✓ I find it more comfortable than weather when it is wet.

'Then' should be 'than' for comparison. Also, tense should be present 'find' to match the context.

× I my banks here is so weird and.

✓ My body feels strange here and

The original sentence is unclear and fragmented. 'My banks' is likely a mishearing of 'my body'. The sentence needs to be completed properly.

× So hot, so I prefer dry weather.

✓ It is so hot, so I prefer dry weather.

The sentence fragment lacks a subject. Adding 'It is' completes the sentence.

× Yes, every day I check.

✓ Yes, I check the weather forecast every day.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the object 'weather forecast'. Rearranging improves clarity.

× Weather forecast.

✓ I check the weather forecast.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb, making it incomplete.

× An almost every day before.

✓ Almost every day before

Fragment; needs to be connected to a complete sentence.

× Before sleeping bed.

✓ Before going to bed.

Incorrect phrase 'sleeping bed' should be 'going to bed'.

× Before going to bed.

✓ I check the weather forecast before going to bed.

Fragment; needs subject and verb to be complete.

× Two times in a day.

✓ I check it two times a day.

Fragment; needs subject and verb.

× Morning, Ann.

✓ In the morning and at night.

'Ann' is likely 'and'. Needs prepositions for time.

× Didn't. Night.

✓ I check it at night.

Fragment; needs subject and verb.

× I think this injury, it's getting hotter because.

✓ I think recently, it's getting hotter because.

'This injury' is incorrect; likely 'recently' or 'these years' intended.

× Almost every year in the summer.

✓ Almost every summer,

Fragment; needs to be connected to a main clause.

× Daniel said.

✓ the temperature has increased.

'Daniel said' is unclear and likely a mishearing; needs correction to meaningful phrase.

× This year.

✓ This year,

Fragment; needs to be connected to a main clause.

× The codes.

✓ the temperature reached

'The codes' is unclear; likely 'the temperature' or 'the records' intended.

× The highest temperature.

✓ the highest temperature recorded.

Fragment; needs to be connected to a main clause.

× Since then, so I think it's getting hotter.

✓ since then, so I think it's getting hotter.

Sentence is acceptable but could be combined with previous for clarity.

× Yes, because I hate rainy wizard especially I like to visit.

✓ Yes, because I hate rainy weather, especially I like to visit places with good weather.

'Wizard' is incorrect; should be 'weather'. The sentence is fragmented and needs clarification.

× Eatery be 'cause the.

✓ I would like to visit other countries because

Fragment and unclear; needs correction to meaningful phrase.

× Countries with OET joy wizard so.

✓ countries with enjoyable weather, so

'OET joy wizard' is incorrect; likely 'enjoyable weather' intended.

× I don't need to care about rainy, so I would like to go there.

✓ I don't need to worry about rain, so I would like to go there.

'Care about rainy' is incorrect; 'worry about rain' is correct.