天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议加强基本语法和词汇的准确使用，避免重复和无意义的词汇。

示例: The weather in Sydney is usually very hot and sunny, which I find uncomfortable sometimes.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅，建议使用正确的时态和动词形式，并且用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

示例: I prefer cold weather because I can do more activities like running and swimming, which help me stay healthy.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不准确，建议学习正确的句子结构和连接词，表达观点时要清晰具体。

示例: I prefer dry weather because I drive often, and dry conditions are safer for driving.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不流畅，建议使用正确的句型和词汇，明确表达频率和原因。

示例: I usually check the weather forecast about three times a week, especially when I need to go to work or school.

建议: 回答内容不清晰且语法错误严重，建议学习相关词汇和句型，表达观点时要具体且有逻辑。

示例: I think climate change has caused more extreme weather in recent years, such as hotter summers and unpredictable storms.

建议: 回答中有重复和发音错误，建议注意句子结构和词汇的准确使用，表达时要连贯自然。

示例: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates to enjoy their weather, beautiful landscapes, and unique cultures.

× The weather are very bad for me because I'm Larry hated scotching hold an ringing while in Sydney on there always ringing and scorching hot.

✓ The weather is very bad for me because I really hate scorching heat and ringing while in Sydney; it is always ringing and scorching hot there.

主语“weather”是不可数名词，应该用单数动词“is”，而不是复数“are”。

× I pray for cold because I think in the cold weather I can doing more things like running and swimming statehood help me practice my health.

✓ I pray for cold because I think in cold weather I can do more things like running and swimming which help me improve my health.

动词“can”后应接动词原形“do”，而不是动名词“doing”。

× I prefer dry weather be 'cause I always driving. Dry weather I think is why we safety for driving.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I always drive. I think dry weather is safer for driving.

“because”不能缩写为“be 'cause”，且“driving”应改为动词原形“drive”。“is why we safety”结构不正确，应改为“is safer”。

× Actually, I don't have this habit to look weather forecasts on maybe, maybe three times a week. This dependent different situation or will I need to working or go to school?

✓ Actually, I don't have the habit of looking at weather forecasts, maybe three times a week. It depends on different situations or whether I need to work or go to school.

“have habit to look”应改为“have the habit of looking at”，介词使用错误。

× Can I make change effect to weather? Yeah, be 'cause in recent years the weather always right here. Yeah, is in norm is a normal manner to be our life.

✓ Can climate change affect the weather? Yes, because in recent years the weather has always been unusual. Yes, it has become a normal part of our lives.

时态使用错误，应使用现在完成时“has always been”表示持续的状态。

× Yeah, of course, because I can. Enjoying enjoying their climate and Luke Hamill landscape and enjoying their cultures.

✓ Yeah, of course, because I can enjoy their climate, beautiful landscapes, and cultures.

“can”后应接动词原形“enjoy”，而不是动名词“enjoying”。