天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points smoothly. For example, instead of saying "not good and not bad," say "it's quite variable." Also, clarify your points with specific examples.

示例: The weather where I live is quite variable; some days are very hot, while others are cloudy. Additionally, we sometimes experience sandstorms, which makes the weather unpredictable.

建议: Work on fluency and sentence structure to make your answer clearer and more natural. Avoid fragmented sentences and use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

示例: I prefer cold weather because it's more comfortable; you don't sweat as much and the risk of sunburn is lower compared to hot weather.

建议: Try to speak more fluently and avoid hesitation. Use complete sentences and linking words to explain your preference clearly and logically.

示例: I prefer dry weather because I dislike rain; it prevents me from going outside. Dry weather allows me to stay active without worrying about getting wet.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by using smoother linking words and more natural phrasing. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

示例: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning when I wake up because it helps me decide what to wear and whether to stay home or go out.

建议: Try to organize your ideas clearly and use complete sentences. Explain the causes and effects logically with linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I think climate change is mainly caused by pollution from factories releasing harmful gases into the air, which contributes to global warming and environmental problems.

建议: Improve fluency by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about your reasons.

示例: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates to experience new weather conditions and learn how those places are affected by climate change.

× so we don't know when it's gonna be going to be bad and when it's going to be good.

✓ so we don't know when it's going to be bad and when it's going to be good.

The phrase 'gonna be going to be' is redundant and incorrect. 'Gonna' is an informal contraction of 'going to', so using both together is repetitive. The correct form is 'going to be'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In my opinion, I prefer cold weather because it when it's cold.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer cold weather because when it's cold,

The original sentence has an unnecessary 'it' before 'when', which disrupts the sentence structure. Removing 'it' corrects the conjunction usage and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× It's better because.

✓ It's better because you don't get sweaty and you don't get sunburned.

The sentence 'It's better because.' is incomplete and lacks a reason. Completing the sentence with the reason clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× You can get sunburn in. Cold weathers, but not a lot.

✓ You can get sunburned in cold weather, but not a lot.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly separated and 'cold weathers' is incorrect pluralization. 'Cold weather' is uncountable and should not be pluralized. Also, 'sunburn' should be 'sunburned' as an adjective describing the effect.

× I prefer dry weather because I don't like wet weather like raining.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I don't like wet weather like rain.

The word 'raining' is a verb form and should be replaced with the noun 'rain' to correctly describe the type of weather.

× When it's raining, I feel I don't I can't get outside because I'm I'm going to get. Wait, I really like dry because I don't get wet often and it's really good. It's for.

✓ When it's raining, I feel I can't go outside because I'm going to get wet. I really like dry weather because I don't get wet often and it's really good for me.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words and incomplete thoughts. Correcting the sentence structure and removing repetitions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I I checked the weather every single morning first I wake up.

✓ Yes, I check the weather every single morning when I first wake up.

The verb 'checked' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a habitual action, which requires the present tense 'check'. Also, adding 'when' clarifies the timing of the action.

× And I like to check the weather because I want to know what is going to happen today and what to wear and if I want to stay at home or go outside.

✓ And I like to check the weather because I want to know what is going to happen today, what to wear, and whether I want to stay at home or go outside.

The sentence needed commas to separate items in the list and 'if' should be replaced with 'whether' for clarity in this context.

× It's from pollution because a lot of factories. They have bud air so they let it out and that that's why happens pollution.

✓ It's from pollution because a lot of factories release bad air, so they let it out and that's why pollution happens.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect word usage ('bud' instead of 'bad'). Correcting the sentence structure and word choice improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, of course I would love to experience other countries and other cities experienced their weather from from where I live.

✓ Yes, of course I would love to experience other countries and other cities and experience their weather different from where I live.

The phrase 'experienced their weather from from where I live' is incorrect. It should be 'experience their weather different from where I live' to correctly express the comparison.

× I want to see other countries, what weather they have and what climate change they go through.

✓ I want to see other countries, what weather they have and what climate changes they go through.

'Climate change' is a singular uncountable noun, but here it refers to different changes in climate in various countries, so the plural 'climate changes' is more appropriate.