天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Please try to answer directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and avoid unnecessary words. For example, say 'The weather where I live is generally hot and humid because it is a tropical country. Even in December, temperatures remain around 30 degrees Celsius, but they decrease at the beginning of January.'

示例: The weather where I live is generally hot and humid because it is a tropical country. Even in December, temperatures remain around 30 degrees Celsius, but they decrease at the beginning of January.

建议: Please give a clear and complete answer with correct grammar. Avoid unclear or incomplete sentences. For example, say 'I prefer cold weather because I am used to living in a tropical country with hot and humid weather all year round. Cold weather feels more comfortable to me.'

示例: I prefer cold weather because I am used to living in a tropical country with hot and humid weather all year round. Cold weather feels more comfortable to me.

建议: Please answer directly and clearly with correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, say 'I prefer dry weather because living in a tropical country means it is usually humid and wet, which makes me feel uncomfortable and sticky. Dry weather feels fresher and more pleasant to me.'

示例: I prefer dry weather because living in a tropical country means it is usually humid and wet, which makes me feel uncomfortable and sticky. Dry weather feels fresher and more pleasant to me.

建议: Please use correct words and grammar. Answer clearly and logically. For example, say 'I usually check the weather forecast every day because the weather in my country is very unpredictable. It can feel like three seasons in one day. Knowing the forecast helps me plan my activities and avoid problems.'

示例: I usually check the weather forecast every day because the weather in my country is very unpredictable. It can feel like three seasons in one day. Knowing the forecast helps me plan my activities and avoid problems.

建议: Please speak clearly and use correct vocabulary. For example, say 'I think the main effect of climate change in recent years is the increase in greenhouse gases caused by human activities. Emissions from factories cause global warming, which leads to extreme weather events like floods and droughts.'

示例: I think the main effect of climate change in recent years is the increase in greenhouse gases caused by human activities. Emissions from factories cause global warming, which leads to extreme weather events like floods and droughts.

建议: Please answer clearly and use correct grammar. For example, say 'Sure, I would love to visit cities with different climates from where I live. Since I live in a tropical country with hot and humid weather, I have never experienced snow or very cold temperatures. I want to experience that one day.'

示例: Sure, I would love to visit cities with different climates from where I live. Since I live in a tropical country with hot and humid weather, I have never experienced snow or very cold temperatures. I want to experience that one day.

× No, Weather where I lives is generally hot and humid because it is a topical country.

✓ No, the weather where I live is generally hot and humid because it is a tropical country.

The word 'Weather' should be lowercase and preceded by 'the' as it refers to specific weather. 'I lives' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the singular subject 'I', so it should be 'I live'. 'Topical' is a misspelling of 'tropical'.

× No, Weather where I lives is generally hot and humid because it is a topical country.

✓ No, the weather where I live is generally hot and humid because it is a tropical country.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'weather' because it refers to a specific weather condition in the speaker's location.

× Ann is will decrease at beginning of January.

✓ It will decrease at the beginning of January.

'Ann is will' is incorrect; 'will' is a modal verb and should be used alone with the base verb. Also, 'at beginning of January' requires the definite article 'the' before 'beginning'.

× So the climate, quite.

✓ So the climate is quite warm.

The sentence lacks a verb and a complement. Adding 'is quite warm' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× I prefer cold weather because I used to live in tropical country that produce.

✓ I prefer cold weather because I used to live in a tropical country that produces.

'Tropical country' needs the indefinite article 'a'. The verb 'produce' should be 'produces' to agree with the singular subject 'country'.

× Haunt. And humidity, weather all years.

✓ Hot and humid weather all year round.

'Haunt' is a misspelling of 'hot'. The phrase 'weather all years' is incorrect; it should be 'weather all year round' to express continuous condition.

× Cruise every year.

✓ It is like this every year.

The sentence 'Cruise every year' is unclear and incomplete. Rephrasing to 'It is like this every year' clarifies the meaning.

× This also Hawks.

✓ This also happens.

'Hawks' is incorrect here; likely intended word is 'happens'.

× And there's this is rarely get cold in in in. Indiana V Diaz.

✓ And it rarely gets cold in Indiana.

The sentence has repeated words and unclear place name. Correcting to 'it rarely gets cold in Indiana' makes it grammatically correct and clear.

× Afterward I'll weather because they live in the tropical countries where it is usually bring humid with better makes me feel uncomfortable and sticky and this can get very hot which is quite exciting.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I live in a tropical country where it is usually very humid, which makes me feel uncomfortable and sticky, and it can get very hot, which is quite exhausting.

'Afterward I'll weather' is incorrect; should be 'I prefer dry weather'. 'They live' should be 'I live' to match the speaker. 'Bring humid with better' is incorrect; should be 'very humid'. 'Exciting' is likely a wrong word choice; 'exhausting' fits better in context.

× Driver their fields with fresher and more presents for me.

✓ Dryer fields with fresher air and more pleasant conditions for me.

'Driver their fields' is incorrect; likely intended 'dryer fields'. 'Presents' should be 'pleasant'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I usually shake the weather forecast every day because my country has very unpredictable better, but it can feel like three seasons in Sunday.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast every day because my country has very unpredictable weather, and it can feel like three seasons in one day.

'Shake' should be 'check'. 'Better' should be 'weather'. 'In Sunday' is incorrect; should be 'in one day'.

× Knowing the first cast help me plan my activities better anawim any problems.

✓ Knowing the forecast helps me plan my activities better and avoid any problems.

'First cast' should be 'forecast'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject. 'Anawim' is likely 'avoid' misspelled.

× These habits make it easier for me to live.

✓ These habits make it easier for me to live my life.

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'my life' clarifies the meaning.

× I think the main effects of crime and shared in recent years is the increase in greenhouse gases caused by humans activities, she says.

✓ I think the main effect of climate change in recent years is the increase in greenhouse gases caused by human activities, she says.

'Crime and shared' is a mishearing of 'climate change'. 'Effects' should be 'effect' to agree with singular verb 'is'. 'Humans activities' should be 'human activities'.

× Emissions from factories cause an efference.

✓ Emissions from factories cause an effect.

'Efference' is a misspelling of 'effect'.

× This happened to global warming which causes extreme weather events like floods drop. And resource.

✓ This leads to global warming, which causes extreme weather events like floods, droughts, and resource shortages.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Drop' should be 'drought'. Added missing words for clarity.

× Sure, I would love to resist. Cities with different climates from where I live.

✓ Sure, I would love to visit cities with different climates from where I live.

'Resist' is incorrect; should be 'visit'.

× Since I live in tropical country, the weather is which is really hot and humid, so I have never experiences snow on very cold temperatures.

✓ Since I live in a tropical country, the weather is really hot and humid, so I have never experienced snow or very cold temperatures.

Missing article 'a' before 'tropical country'. 'Experiences' should be 'experienced' to match past tense. 'On' should be 'or'.

× So I want to with this. Something this one day.

✓ So I want to experience this someday.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrased for clarity and correctness.