天气— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains unclear phrases which affect clarity. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy by directly describing the weather and surroundings with clear sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: The weather where I live is mostly sunny and pleasant. Because of this, flowers are blooming and greenery is abundant. Additionally, I can often hear birds singing, which makes the environment very peaceful.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has some pronunciation and grammar issues. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to connect your reasons clearly. Avoid fragmented sentences and be specific about why you prefer cold weather.

示例: I prefer cold weather because in hot weather, the scorching sun makes it difficult to do activities comfortably. Therefore, in cold weather, I can go outside easily without worrying about sunburns.

建议: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using linking words such as 'because' and 'so' to make it more coherent. Also, try to avoid minor grammatical errors and be more specific about your reasons.

示例: I prefer dry weather because in wet weather, my clothes often get dirty and require frequent washing. So, in dry weather, I can go out easily without worrying about getting dirty.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains unclear phrases and some grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words like 'however' or 'but' properly. Also, avoid repetition and be concise.

示例: I usually do not check the weather forecast. However, when I plan to visit new places or go on outings with friends, I check it to prepare accordingly.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to organize your ideas logically, use specific examples, and link your points with appropriate connectors like 'for example' or 'also'.

示例: Climate change has caused many effects recently. For example, the melting of snow-capped mountains and increased deforestation are serious issues. Also, floods have become more frequent in many areas.

建议: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words like 'for example' and ensure subject-verb agreement. Be more specific about the types of climates and activities you enjoy.

示例: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates from my hometown. For example, I enjoy visiting cold places as well as warm beach areas where I can relax and have fun.

× It gave. Son, all the time and the weather is really nice.

✓ It shines all the time and the weather is really nice.

The original sentence uses 'gave' incorrectly as a past participle form for the verb 'give' in this context. The correct verb to describe the sun shining is 'shine', and in present tense, it should be 'shines'.

× there are greenery everywhere and there is also phrase as well as we can hear the board shipping

✓ there is greenery everywhere and there is also fragrance as well as we can hear the boat shipping

'Greenery' is uncountable and should be preceded by 'there is' not 'there are'. 'Phrase' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'fragrance'. 'Board shipping' is incorrect; it should be 'boat shipping'. These are prepositional and word choice errors.

× I prefer cold weather rather than that of hot weather, as in hot weather I cannot do anything perfectly due to the. Scratching sun and heat

✓ I prefer cold weather rather than hot weather, as in hot weather I cannot do anything perfectly due to the scorching sun and heat

The word 'scratching' is a wrong adjective; the correct word is 'scorching' to describe intense heat. Also, 'that of hot weather' is unnecessarily complex; 'rather than hot weather' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× but in a coiled whether we can do everything easily, go out easily without getting any kind of sun bonds.

✓ but in cold weather we can do everything easily, go out easily without getting any kind of sunburns.

'Coiled whether' is a misspelling of 'cold weather'. 'Sun bonds' is incorrect; the correct term is 'sunburns'. These are errors in word choice and spelling affecting prepositional meaning.

× In the wet weather my clothes get really dirty and I need to wash them regularly. But in the dry weather I do not need to clean my loads regularly an I do not get. Much dirty

✓ In wet weather my clothes get really dirty and I need to wash them regularly. But in dry weather I do not need to clean my clothes regularly and I do not get very dirty

'Loads' is incorrect; the intended word is 'clothes'. Also, 'much dirty' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'very dirty'. These are errors in plural noun usage and adjective modification.

× I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast, but whenever I go to some new places or I have some plants of breaking an outing with my friends, then I use a lytic the wither.

✓ I'm not in the habit of checking the weather forecast, but whenever I go to some new places or I have plans of making an outing with my friends, then I use a weather app.

'Plants of breaking an outing' is incorrect; it should be 'plans of making an outing'. 'Lytic the wither' is a mishearing or misspelling; likely intended 'weather app'. These are errors in word choice and prepositional phrases.

× There are many effect due to the climate change such as the melting down of is snowy capped mountains as well as deforestation.

✓ There are many effects due to climate change such as the melting down of snowy capped mountains as well as deforestation.

'Effect' should be plural 'effects' to agree with 'many'. 'Is snowy capped mountains' is incorrect; 'snowy capped mountains' is correct without 'is'. These are singular/plural and article usage errors.

× And left side that is occurring in many places as well as the flaws that are going all around the. Places and other climate change is due to the. Recent climate.

✓ And landslides that are occurring in many places as well as the floods that are going all around the places and other climate changes are due to recent climate shifts.

'Left side' is incorrect; the intended word is 'landslides'. 'Flaws' should be 'floods'. 'Other climate change is due to the recent climate' is unclear; corrected to 'other climate changes are due to recent climate shifts'. These are errors in word choice and prepositional phrases.

× I like to visit the places where the weather are cold and sometimes I also like to visit the places where the weather are suddenly like in the beach.

✓ I like to visit places where the weather is cold and sometimes I also like to visit places where the weather is sunny like at the beach.

'Weather are' is incorrect; 'weather' is singular and should be followed by 'is'. 'Suddenly' is incorrect; the intended word is 'sunny'. 'In the beach' should be 'at the beach'. These are errors in subject-verb agreement and prepositions.