写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较为自然，但句子结构较为简单且有些重复，建议简化表达并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

示例: Yes, I write quite often, especially when communicating with my group mates, because it helps us conveniently take notes and list tasks we need to complete.

建议: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，建议理清思路，使用完整句子并具体说明喜欢写什么及原因。

示例: I like to write notes by hand because it helps me remember information better than just looking at digital documents.

建议: 表达有些混乱，建议使用更准确的语法和连接词，清晰说明观点并举例支持。

示例: Yes, I think what I write can change. For example, handwritten notes are easier to modify quickly, while editing digital documents can be time-consuming.

建议: 回答中有较多犹豫词和语法错误，建议减少口头语，使用完整句子并清晰表达偏好和原因。

示例: I prefer handwriting because when I type, the keyboard's auto-correct hides my spelling mistakes, but writing by hand helps me notice and correct them.

建议: 表达不够自然且有语法错误，建议用更自然的表达方式说明观点，并避免重复。

示例: Honestly, I don't keep a diary because I find it boring and prefer sharing my moments on social media instead.

建议: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且有重复，建议使用连接词分句，表达更清晰自然。

示例: I like to record my life by taking videos and pictures, which I then share on social media to connect with my family and friends.

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

这里的主语是复数形式“documents”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是单数“is”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× The digital documents is just I look cannot remember efficiently, but right can.

✓ The digital documents are just something I look at but cannot remember efficiently, but writing can.

“documents”是复数名词，谓语动词应与主语保持一致，使用复数形式“are”。

× Nowadays I prefer to writing because if I tap, I always umm, depend on the keyboard to spell it.

✓ Nowadays I prefer writing because if I tap, I always depend on the keyboard to spell it.

动词“prefer”后面应直接跟动名词形式“writing”，而不是不定式“to writing”。

× I prefer to take a video or take some pictures to remember this moment and post it on my social media to share with my families and friends because I think this way can help me to connect with with them and share them that everyone know me.

✓ I prefer to take a video or some pictures to remember this moment and post them on my social media to share with my family and friends because I think this way can help me connect with them and let everyone know me.

“families”应为不可数名词“family”，“share them that everyone know me”结构不正确，应改为“let everyone know me”。此外，“connect with with them”重复，应去掉一个“with”。

× I prefer to take a video or take some pictures to remember this moment and post it on my social media to share with my families and friends because I think this way can help me to connect with with them and share them that everyone know me.

✓ I prefer to take a video or some pictures to remember this moment and post them on my social media to share with my family and friends because I think this way can help me connect with them and let everyone know me.

“post it”中的“it”应指代复数“video or pictures”，应使用复数代词“them”。“share them that everyone know me”表达不正确，应改为“let everyone know me”。

× I prefer to take a video or take some pictures to remember this moment and post it on my social media to share with my families and friends because I think this way can help me to connect with with them and share them that everyone know me.

✓ I prefer to take a video or some pictures to remember this moment and post them on my social media to share with my family and friends because I think this way can help me connect with them and let everyone know me.

“families”应为不可数名词“family”，且“share them that everyone know me”表达不正确，应改为“let everyone know me”。

× I prefer to take a video or take some pictures to remember this moment and post it on my social media to share with my families and friends because I think this way can help me to connect with with them and share them that everyone know me.

✓ I prefer to take a video or some pictures to remember this moment and post them on my social media to share with my family and friends because I think this way can help me connect with them and let everyone know me.

“connect with with them”中“with”重复，应去掉一个。

× I prefer to take a video or take some pictures to remember this moment and post it on my social media to share with my families and friends because I think this way can help me to connect with with them and share them that everyone know me.

✓ I prefer to take a video or some pictures to remember this moment and post them on my social media to share with my family and friends because I think this way can help me connect with them and let everyone know me.

“share them that everyone know me”表达不正确，应改为“let everyone know me”，使句子更通顺。