写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains unclear phrases like "She's silent." Try to avoid repeating the question and focus on clear, concise sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I write quite often because it is an important part of my education. For example, I regularly complete assignments for school and make notes at home. Writing helps me organise my thoughts and complete tasks efficiently.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and has many hesitations. Try to complete your thoughts fully and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

示例: I like to write poems and stories to express myself. In our hectic lives, we mostly use computers to type, but writing with pen and paper feels more personal and creative to me.

建议: There are some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structures. Also, explain your ideas with clear examples and linking words.

示例: Yes, I believe the way we write will change significantly because of advances in technology. For instance, voice recognition software allows us to dictate text, making writing faster and more convenient, although traditional writing still has its place.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and has hesitations. Try to complete your sentences and avoid filler words. Use linking words to compare your preferences clearly.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I feel more expressive when writing with pen and paper. Typing on a computer feels slower and less personal to me.

建议: Your answer has many hesitations and some unclear words like 'tax' which might be 'tasks'. Try to speak clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

示例: I always maintain a diary to remind myself of future tasks as it is part of my business. By keeping a diary, I can organise and prioritise my tasks in advance.

建议: Your answer is generally good but has some hesitations and minor grammatical errors. Try to speak smoothly and use plural/singular forms correctly. Use linking words to list your methods clearly.

示例: I use diaries, notebooks, and cloud storage to record my life. Additionally, I store photographs taken with my smartphone, videos, and important documents that reflect my experiences.

× writing has been important part of my education

✓ writing has been an important part of my education

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'an' before 'important part'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article. Here, 'part' is singular and countable, so 'an' is necessary.

× I often write assignment for school

✓ I often write assignments for school

The noun 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' because the verb 'write' and the context imply multiple assignments. Singular form is incorrect here.

× Writing helps me organize my thought and complete my tasks efficiently

✓ Writing helps me organize my thoughts and complete my tasks efficiently

The noun 'thought' should be plural 'thoughts' because it refers to multiple ideas or mental processes. Using singular 'thought' is incorrect in this context.

× I like to write poem and write a story

✓ I like to write poems and write stories

Both 'poem' and 'story' should be plural to indicate the general activity of writing multiple poems and stories. Singular form is incorrect here.

× where only have to type things

✓ where we only have to type things

The subject pronoun 'we' is missing before 'only have to type things'. English sentences require explicit subjects.

× Yes, I believe the way we ride will change significant

✓ Yes, I believe the way we write will change significantly

The word 'ride' is incorrect; it should be 'write' to match the context. Also, 'significant' is an adjective but an adverb 'significantly' is needed to modify the verb 'change'.

× urban spend of technology

✓ urban use of technology

The phrase 'urban spend of technology' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'urban use of technology' to express the intended meaning.

× This make writing more faster and more convenient

✓ This makes writing faster and more convenient

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'This'. Also, 'more faster' is incorrect; 'faster' alone is the comparative form.

× Although traditional writing list

✓ Although traditional writing lasts

The word 'list' is incorrect; it should be 'lasts' to convey that traditional writing continues to exist.

× I prefer handwriting more than typing

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing

The correct preposition after 'prefer' when comparing two things is 'to', not 'more than'.

× I always uh, maintain Diaries to remind M my uh, future tax as it is part of my business

✓ I always maintain diaries to remind me of my future tasks as it is part of my business

The pronoun 'M' is incorrect; it should be 'me'. Also, 'tax' should be 'tasks' to fit the context.

× I by maintaining diary able to organize myself and prioritize, prioritize my tax in advance

✓ By maintaining a diary, I am able to organize myself and prioritize my tasks in advance

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'diary'. Also, 'tax' should be 'tasks'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I use a Diaries, notebook, uh, cloud storage to uh, record my life

✓ I use diaries, a notebook, and cloud storage to record my life

'Diaries' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. 'Notebook' is singular and requires the article 'a'. Also, 'and' is needed before the last item in the list.

× which I taken using smartphones

✓ which I have taken using smartphones

The verb phrase is missing the auxiliary verb 'have' to form the present perfect tense 'have taken'.