写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，且内容稍显重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

示例: Yes, I write quite a lot because I am an art student. I often have to write essays for my politics and history classes, especially since I am in my final year of high school.

建议: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，且未直接回答喜欢写什么。建议明确表达喜好，避免重复和不连贯的句子。

示例: Actually, I don't enjoy writing by hand because I've been doing it for many years. I prefer typing on my smartphone or computer because it's faster and more convenient.

建议: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达有误。建议用更清楚的句子表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

示例: It depends on the situation. For example, when I take notes in class or meetings, my writing style stays the same. However, I might change my writing when doing homework to make it more detailed.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议直接表达偏好，并简洁说明原因。

示例: I definitely prefer typing because I have had to handwrite a lot throughout my school years, which I found tiring. Typing is faster and more comfortable for me.

建议: 回答表达不流畅，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地说明不写日记的原因。

示例: I don't keep a diary regularly. I tried when I was a child, but I didn't have much to write about, so I stopped and haven't kept one since.

建议: 回答内容不够具体，表达不清晰。建议明确说明使用的记录方法，并用连贯的句子表达。

示例: I usually rely on my memory to remember important events. Also, I keep conversations on WeChat, which helps me recall details about my life.

× I need to write a lot, no matter on the politics classes or on the history classes.

✓ I need to write a lot, no matter in the politics classes or in the history classes.

介词使用错误，英语中表示“在某些课程中”应使用介词'in'，而不是'on'。建议将'on'改为'in'。

× I need to write about homework.

✓ I need to write homework.

“homework”是不可数名词，不需要加介词“about”。“write about homework”表达不正确，应直接说“write homework”。

× I write 2 words.

✓ I write two words.

数字应写成英文单词形式，且“2 words”表达不清，可能想表达“write a few words”或“write a lot of words”，建议明确表达。

× I prefer to type something on my smartphone or on my computers.

✓ I prefer to type something on my smartphone or on my computer.

“computer”单数形式更合适，且“computers”复数形式与上下文不符。

× Well, it should be see in different situations, you know, like if sometimes I need to write some notes, uh, when I have a meeting or when I have a class, I don't think I will change my writing, but when I am doing some homework I think I will change something about them.

✓ Well, it should be seen in different situations, you know, like if sometimes I need to write some notes, uh, when I have a meeting or when I have a class, I don't think I will change my writing, but when I am doing some homework I think I will change something about them.

动词“see”应使用过去分词“seen”构成被动语态。

× No matter in my primary school, Senior High School, or even in high school, I still need to write a lot just by my hand.

✓ No matter whether in my primary school, Senior High School, or even in high school, I still need to write a lot just by hand.

“No matter”后面应接“whether”引导的从句，且“just by my hand”应改为“just by hand”，表示用手写。

× Well, I never keep Diaries for, you know, when I was a kid, I tried to keep a diary, but you know, I'm just a kid.

✓ Well, I never keep diaries. You know, when I was a kid, I tried to keep a diary, but you know, I was just a kid.

“Diaries”不应大写，且时态应保持一致，过去时“was”更合适。

× So I from then on, I do not write Diaries until now.

✓ So from then on, I have not written diaries until now.

“from then on”后应直接接句子，且时态应为现在完成时，表示从过去持续到现在的动作。

× Well, the most common thing I use to recommend my life maybe my memory and the recording methods with others.

✓ Well, the most common thing I use to record my life maybe my memory and recording methods with others.

“recommend”用错，应为“record”，表示“记录”。

× For example, if I talk someone else on WeChat, you know I will have the words on my smartphones, so I use that.

✓ For example, if I talk to someone else on WeChat, you know I will have the words on my smartphone, so I use that.

动词“talk”后应加介词“to”，且“smartphones”应为单数“smartphone”，与上下文一致。