写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use complete sentences and avoid informal expressions like 'write a lot on mobile'. Also, add a reason to make your answer more informative and natural.

示例: I don't write much on paper, but I often write messages and notes on my mobile phone because it is more convenient.

建议: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms, and provide clearer reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I don't like writing much, but I do write important things such as letters to my friends and to-do lists because they help me stay organized.

建议: Use more formal language and explain your idea more clearly with specific reasons. Avoid informal contractions like 'you're'.

示例: Yes, I believe the things I write will change as I grow older because my thoughts and priorities will develop over time.

建议: Correct the word 'timing' to 'typing' and expand your answer with reasons using linking words for clarity.

示例: I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit my work on a computer.

建议: Use correct grammar and avoid short, abrupt answers. Provide a full sentence and explain your habit clearly.

示例: I never keep diaries because I find it difficult to write regularly and prefer other ways to record my experiences.

建议: Rearrange the sentence for natural flow and add more details to explain why you use videos.

示例: I usually record my life by making videos because they capture moments more vividly than writing.

× I don't like write anything but I write what is important like letters to my friends and to do lists.

✓ I don't like writing anything but I write what is important like letters to my friends and to-do lists.

The verb 'like' when followed by another verb should be followed by the '-ing' form (gerund). So, 'like write' is incorrect; it should be 'like writing'. This is a common rule in English grammar for verbs expressing preferences.

× Yes, I believe that because when you're grown up, your mind is changed.

✓ Yes, I believe that because when you grow up, your mind changes.

The phrase 'when you're grown up' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'when you grow up' using the simple present tense to indicate a general truth or habitual action. Also, 'your mind is changed' should be 'your mind changes' to use the simple present active form, which is appropriate here.

× I prefer timing because it's faster and easier.

✓ I prefer typing because it's faster and easier.

The word 'timing' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'typing'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but it affects the meaning of the sentence. 'Typing' is the correct verb for inputting text on a keyboard.

× I am never write Diaries. Ever.

✓ I never write diaries. Ever.

The phrase 'I am never write' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'I never write' using the simple present tense for habitual actions. Also, 'Diaries' should not be capitalized unless it is a title.