写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答较简短，表达较为自然，但缺少具体细节和连贯性。建议增加具体写作内容的描述，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

示例: Yes, I write quite often because it helps me preserve my fond memories. For example, I keep a journal where I record daily events and feelings, which makes my memories more vivid.

建议: 语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和冠词使用，同时丰富内容，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I like to write various things, such as diaries and class notes. I find class notes especially important because they help me review and understand the material better.

建议: 回答表达不清晰，语法和句子结构有误。建议理清思路，使用正确的时态和句型，并增加具体细节。

示例: Yes, the things I write change depending on my free time. When I have plenty of time, I write longer articles, but when I am busy, I only write short notes.

建议: 表达较为清楚，但句子较长且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的表达，并注意连贯性。

示例: I prefer handwriting because handwritten notes last longer. Typing on a computer or phone is convenient, but files might be lost when I change devices.

建议: 语法错误明显，表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态和频率副词，句子更简洁明了。

示例: I usually keep a diary every day, but when I am very busy, I might write only twice a week.

建议: 表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意动词形式和词汇搭配，句子更自然流畅。

示例: Sometimes, I take photos to capture special moments. Looking at these pictures always gives me a sense of happiness.

× I like write many things such as Diaries and some class note.

✓ I like to write many things such as diaries and some class notes.

这里diaries和class notes应该用复数形式，因为表示多样的事物。并且动词后面缺少to不定式。

× I like write many things such as Diaries and some class note.

✓ I like to write many things such as diaries and some class notes.

动词like后面应该接不定式to write，而不是直接接write。

× I think class note is very significant for me because it's beneficial for my study.

✓ I think class notes are very significant for me because they're beneficial for my study.

class notes是复数，谓语动词和代词也应使用复数形式。

× Oh yes, when I have a lot of free time I will write some articles and some there is, but when I busy I have no time to write them and I will write them shortly.

✓ Oh yes, when I have a lot of free time I will write some articles and other things, but when I am busy I have no time to write them and I will write them shortly.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，there is用法错误，应改为other things；缺少be动词am。

× For myself, I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting can keep for a long time, but if I type in on my computer or on my cell phones, it may be lost if I change some more electronic products.

✓ For myself, I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting can be kept for a long time, but if I type on my computer or on my cell phone, it may be lost if I change to other electronic products.

handwriting后应使用被动语态be kept；type后应直接接on，不用in on；cell phones应为单数cell phone；change后应接to而非some more。

× Most of the time I keep Diaries every day, but sometimes if I were very busy I maybe keep there with twice a week.

✓ Most of the time I keep diaries every day, but sometimes if I am very busy I may keep them twice a week.

diaries应小写且复数；were应为am以符合现在时态；maybe应为may；keep there with twice a week表达不正确，应改为keep them twice a week。

× Most of the time I keep Diaries every day, but sometimes if I were very busy I maybe keep there with twice a week.

✓ Most of the time I keep diaries every day, but sometimes if I am very busy I may keep them twice a week.

there用法错误，应使用代词them指代diaries。

× I think when I scan my pictures it can gives me a sense of happiness.

✓ I think when I look at my pictures it can give me a sense of happiness.

scan通常指扫描，不适合此处表达；应使用look at；gives主语是it，应为give。