写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中多次使用了“read”而非“write”，导致表达不准确。建议注意区分“write”和“read”，并且回答时要简洁明了，避免重复和语法错误。

示例: Yes, I write quite often because as a student, I need to complete many assignments and take notes by hand.

建议: 回答中仍然混淆了“write”和“read”，且表达不够连贯。建议直接回答喜欢写什么，并用连接词如“because”来说明原因，句子结构更清晰。

示例: I like to write to-do lists because completing each task one by one gives me a strong sense of achievement and motivates me.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，且“read”与“write”混用。建议用简单句表达观点，注意时态和词汇准确性。

示例: Yes, definitely. I used to write diaries to express my feelings, but now I mainly write lists because my priorities have changed.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和冗余。建议简化句子，去掉多余部分，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I prefer handwriting because I have been using it since childhood to complete my homework and organize my tasks.

建议: 回答中“read”与“write”混淆，且表达不够准确。建议直接说明频率并解释原因，注意语法和词汇的正确使用。

示例: I don't keep diaries very often, maybe two or three times a month, because I don't find it very useful for me.

建议: 回答内容较好，但句子结构可以更自然，避免重复。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: I usually use my phone to make to-do lists because it's convenient and efficient. I check the list and complete tasks one by one, which gives me a sense of achievement.

× Well, Oh yes, I read along.

✓ Well, oh yes, I read a lot.

The phrase 'read along' is incorrect here; the student likely meant 'read a lot' to express frequency. 'Along' is a preposition or adverb and does not fit the intended meaning.

× I'm a student now, so I need to read aloud of assignments by hand.

✓ I'm a student now, so I need to read aloud assignments by hand.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used after 'read aloud'. The correct phrase is 'read aloud assignments' without 'of'.

× So I often read on such a song tasks, assignments and group projects.

✓ So I often work on such tasks, assignments, and group projects.

The phrase 'read on such a song tasks' is incorrect and unclear. Likely, the student meant 'work on such tasks'. Also, 'song' is incorrect here and should be removed.

× Well, I like to read some lists about tasks or assignments and I can do it 1 by 1.

✓ Well, I like to make some lists about tasks or assignments and I can do them one by one.

The verb 'read' is incorrect here; the student likely means 'make' or 'write' lists. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'lists'. '1 by 1' is better expressed as 'one by one'.

× After finishing it, I can enjoy a sense of achievement that's really encourage me, so it's very useful for me.

✓ After finishing them, I can enjoy a sense of achievement that really encourages me, so it's very useful for me.

'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'lists'. 'That's' should be 'that' because it introduces a relative clause. 'Encourage' should be 'encourages' to agree with singular subject 'sense'.

× We are definitely.

✓ We definitely will.

The sentence 'We are definitely.' is incomplete and incorrect. The student likely meant 'We definitely will' to express future certainty.

× For example, I used to read some diary to express my emotions and some important things.

✓ For example, I used to write a diary to express my emotions and some important things.

The verb 'read' is incorrect here; the student likely meant 'write' a diary. Also, 'diary' is countable and should be preceded by an article 'a'.

× By now I just read some lists.

✓ Now I just write some lists.

The verb 'read' is incorrect in this context; the student likely means 'write' lists currently.

× I think because we go through different things.

✓ I think it's because we go through different things.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it's' to be grammatically correct.

× Well, I prefer on handwriting.

✓ Well, I prefer handwriting.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary after 'prefer'. The correct phrase is 'prefer handwriting'.

× You know, I'm a Chinese student, so I'm from childhood until now.

✓ You know, I'm a Chinese student, so since childhood until now, I've always...

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. It needs restructuring to express the intended meaning about habits from childhood to now.

× I always use the handwriting to finish my homework and order things.

✓ I have always used handwriting to finish my homework and organize things.

'Use the handwriting' is incorrect; 'use handwriting' is correct. Also, 'order things' is unclear; 'organize things' is more appropriate. The tense is adjusted to present perfect to indicate a habit from past to present.

× Well, to be honest, I don't keep Diaries very often, maybe on two weeks or three times a month, because I think it's not a very useful for me.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't keep diaries very often, maybe once every two weeks or three times a month, because I think it's not very useful for me.

'Diaries' should not be capitalized. 'On two weeks' is incorrect; 'once every two weeks' is correct. 'A very useful' should be 'very useful' without 'a'.

× Maybe I just read some important things.

✓ Maybe I just write some important things.

The verb 'read' is incorrect here; the student likely means 'write'.

× Well, I usually use my phone to make some plans on the lists because it's very convenient and efficient.

✓ Well, I usually use my phone to make some plans in the lists because it's very convenient and efficient.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'in the lists' is more appropriate to indicate plans within lists.

× I just look it and do it one by one.

✓ I just look at it and do it one by one.

The verb 'look' requires the preposition 'at' when referring to an object. 'Look it' is incorrect.

× That's very useful. I can enjoy a sense of achievement by it.

✓ That's very useful. I can enjoy a sense of achievement from it.

The preposition 'by' is incorrect here; 'from it' is the correct phrase to express the source of achievement.