写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當，例如 "I typing" 應改為 "I have been typing"，並且句子結構不夠清晰。建議你練習使用正確的時態和簡潔的句子結構，避免冗長和重複。

示例: Yes, I have been typing a lot recently because I need to prepare for an exam. Therefore, I use my laptop daily to practice writing.

建议: 你的回答不完整且語法不正確，最後一句話未完成。建議你完整表達想法，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢，例如使用 "because" 或 "so" 來說明原因。

示例: I like to write my future schedule because organizing my plans helps me manage my life better. Also, it reduces my anxiety.

建议: 你的回答語意不清且有語法錯誤，句子結構混亂。建議你先明確回答問題，然後用簡單句子說明原因，避免使用不熟悉的詞彙或片語。

示例: Yes, what I write has changed. When I was in high school, I only wrote what the teachers asked. But now, I will study at university and write about more specialized subjects.

建议: 你的回答表達了偏好，但有語法錯誤和用詞不當，例如 "I inclined typing" 應為 "I prefer typing"。建議你使用正確的動詞和連接詞，使句子更自然流暢。

示例: I prefer typing because it is more efficient than handwriting. As a result, I can take more notes during class, which helps me learn better. However, I still use handwriting for some notes.

× I can say I typing all day recently is because I have to prepare a exam in this list.

✓ I can say I have been typing all day recently because I have to prepare for an exam on this list.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I typing' instead of the present perfect continuous tense 'I have been typing' to indicate an action continuing up to now. Also, 'a exam' should be 'an exam' due to vowel sound, and 'prepare a exam in this list' should be 'prepare for an exam on this list'. Suggestion: Use present perfect continuous tense for ongoing recent actions and correct article usage.

× I can say I typing all day recently is because I have to prepare a exam in this list.

✓ I can say I have been typing all day recently because I have to prepare for an exam on this list.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the vowel sound in 'exam'; it should be 'an'. Also, 'prepare a exam' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prepare for an exam'. Suggestion: Use 'an' before vowel sounds and include the preposition 'for' after 'prepare'.

× I can say I typing all day recently is because I have to prepare a exam in this list.

✓ I can say I have been typing all day recently because I have to prepare for an exam on this list.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'this list'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to items in a list. Suggestion: Use 'prepare for an exam on this list'.

× As a result I have no choice but have to use my laptop to practice writing texts.

✓ As a result, I have no choice but to use my laptop to practice writing texts.

The phrase 'have no choice but have to' is redundant. The correct structure is 'have no choice but to' followed by the base verb. Suggestion: Use 'have no choice but to use'.

× I like to write my schedule in the future.

✓ I like to write my schedule for the future.

The phrase 'in the future' is less appropriate here; 'for the future' better expresses planning ahead. Suggestion: Use 'write my schedule for the future'.

× I think organise my plan and my life is beneficial for me.

✓ I think organizing my plan and my life is beneficial for me.

The verb 'organise' should be in gerund form 'organizing' to act as the subject of the sentence. Suggestion: Use gerund form after 'think' when the verb acts as a noun.

× In addition, it can make me release my anxiety.

✓ In addition, it can help me release my anxiety.

The verb 'make' is incorrectly used with 'release'; 'help' is more appropriate to express assistance. Suggestion: Use 'help me release' instead of 'make me release'.

× Therefore, I think writing my.

✓ Therefore, I think writing helps me.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or complement after 'writing my'. Suggestion: Complete the sentence to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Absolutely in the past.

✓ Absolutely, in the past.

The phrase is a fragment and lacks a verb; adding a comma improves clarity but the sentence remains incomplete. Suggestion: Combine with the following sentence or complete the thought.

× I'm a high school student, therefore I just can't write anything that school tells us.

✓ I was a high school student; therefore, I couldn't write anything that the school told us.

The tense should be past to match 'in the past'. Also, 'school tells us' should be 'the school told us' for past tense and article usage. Suggestion: Use past tense consistently and include definite article 'the' before 'school'.

× However, this week I will go to study in university Lam AU writing more special subjects in my future.

✓ However, this week I will go to study at Lam AU University, writing more specialized subjects in my future.

The preposition 'in' should be 'at' for institutions. The university name order is corrected. 'Special' should be 'specialized' to describe subjects. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions and adjective forms.

× However, this week I will go to study in university Lam AU writing more special subjects in my future.

✓ However, this week I will go to study at Lam AU University, writing more specialized subjects in my future.

Use 'at' instead of 'in' when referring to studying at a university. Suggestion: Use 'study at university'.

× I inclined typing.

✓ I prefer typing.

'Inclined' is an adjective and not correctly used here; 'prefer' is the correct verb to express liking one option over another. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' to express preference.

× Typing is more efficient than handwriting.

✓ Typing is more efficient than handwriting.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× As a result, I can note it down more content than the teacher teach us.

✓ As a result, I can note down more content than the teacher teaches us.

The verb 'teach' should be in third person singular 'teaches' to agree with 'teacher'. Also, 'note it down' is better as 'note down'. Suggestion: Use correct subject-verb agreement and verb phrase.

× In this way I can learn deeper than in the past.

✓ In this way, I can learn more deeply than in the past.

'Deeper' is an adjective; the adverb 'more deeply' should be used to modify the verb 'learn'. Suggestion: Use adverbs to modify verbs.

× I use handwriting on notes.

✓ I use handwriting for notes.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; 'for' is appropriate to indicate purpose. Suggestion: Use 'use handwriting for notes'.