写作— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you write a lot?
考生
Yes, I write a lot. I love writing. I was trying to express my emotion with my notes and it's so important for me because I can express my emotions, I can express my thoughts and it helps me to be clear in my mind.
考官
What do you like to write? Why?
考生
I always try to reflect my emotions. I always try to express my emotions on the paper. When I'm writing, I also thinking in my mind and I'm trying to be clear in my mind.
考官
Do you think the things you write would change?
考生
Of course, of course, when I'm writing and when I'm thinking and when I write my things and my toes on the paper, my mind is increasing, my mindset is increasing. It's makes more clarity.
考官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
考生
I prefer handwriting because I feel better, I feel pain and I feel everything what I want to express. So I always choose handwriting.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
分数: 70.0建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, use a wider range of vocabulary to express your feelings about writing.
示例: Yes, I write frequently because it allows me to express my emotions and thoughts clearly. Writing helps me organize my ideas and brings clarity to my mind.
What do you like to write? Why?
分数: 65.0建议: Your answer repeats the same idea and has some grammatical errors. Try to use linking words and vary your vocabulary. Also, make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and complete.
示例: I like to write about my emotions because it helps me understand myself better. While writing, I reflect on my feelings and thoughts, which brings clarity to my mind.
Do you think the things you write would change?
分数: 60.0建议: Your answer is unclear and contains some confusing phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.
示例: Yes, I believe my writing evolves as my thoughts develop. Writing helps me clarify my mindset and improve my ideas over time.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
分数: 70.0建议: Your answer is understandable but could be more precise and natural. Avoid vague expressions like "I feel pain" unless you explain it. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.
示例: I prefer handwriting because it allows me to connect more deeply with my thoughts and emotions. Writing by hand feels more personal and helps me express myself better.
语法
× When I'm writing, I also thinking in my mind and I'm trying to be clear in my mind.
✓ When I'm writing, I am also thinking in my mind and I'm trying to be clear in my mind.
The verb 'thinking' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense correctly. Without 'am', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.
× when I write my things and my toes on the paper, my mind is increasing, my mindset is increasing.
✓ when I write my things and my thoughts on the paper, my mind is increasing, my mindset is increasing.
The word 'toes' is incorrect in this context; the correct plural noun is 'thoughts' to refer to ideas or mental content.
× It's makes more clarity.
✓ It makes more clarity.
The auxiliary 'It' should be followed by the base verb 'makes' without 's' when combined with 'It'. The correct form is 'It makes' not 'It's makes'.
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