写作— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you write a lot?
考生
Actually no, because nowadays I used to. Use computer more often, so I don't write a lot.
考官
What do you like to write? Why?
考生
I like to write stories if I can write because I think it is romantic and effective.
考官
Do you think the things you write would change?
考生
Yes, I do. The things I write would change in the future because I think people can write different things in different time.
考官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
考生
I prefer typing because I use computer in more often time.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
分数: 50.0建议: 你的回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免断句错误，并且直接回答问题。
示例: No, I don't write a lot because I usually use a computer to type instead of writing by hand.
What do you like to write? Why?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答内容较简单，表达不够清晰。建议明确表达喜欢写故事的原因，并用连接词丰富句子。
示例: I like to write stories because I find them romantic and they allow me to express my creativity effectively.
Do you think the things you write would change?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答有一定逻辑，但表达不够自然，句子结构简单。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并举例说明。
示例: Yes, I believe my writing will change over time because people's interests and experiences evolve, influencing what they write about.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
分数: 50.0建议: 句子结构不正确，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，直接表达偏好并说明原因。
示例: I prefer typing because I use the computer more often, and it is faster and more convenient for me.
语法
× Actually no, because nowadays I used to. Use computer more often, so I don't write a lot.
✓ Actually no, because nowadays I don't use the computer as often, so I don't write a lot.
句中“used to”表示过去常做某事，但“nowadays”表示现在，时态矛盾。应使用现在时态表达现在的习惯。
× Actually no, because nowadays I used to. Use computer more often, so I don't write a lot.
✓ Actually no, because nowadays I don't use the computer as often, so I don't write a lot.
“Use computer more often”缺少冠词“the”，应为“use the computer”。
× I prefer typing because I use computer in more often time.
✓ I prefer typing because I use the computer more often.
“use computer in more often time”结构不正确，正确表达应为“use the computer more often”，去掉多余的介词和词语。
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