写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích ngắn gọn, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'like a lot' mà nên nói 'write a lot'.

示例: Yes, I used to write a lot when I was a student because teachers assigned many writing tasks. However, now I rarely write by hand and mostly type on my computer.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và câu văn rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'that days' nên là 'those days'.

示例: I like to write my daily To Do List in my notebook because checking off tasks gives me a sense of accomplishment, which I don't get when typing notes on my phone or laptop.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không phù hợp hoặc câu bị ngắt quãng.

示例: Yes, I think the things I write change depending on the situation. Usually, I write work-related notes, but sometimes I make shopping lists.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ như 'like' nhiều lần. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'physically notebook' nên là 'physical notebook'.

示例: It depends on the situation. For example, I prefer jotting down To Do Lists in a physical notebook, but for long passages or messages, I usually type on my computer.

× Well, I used to like a lot, yes 'cause I was a student and at university or high school teachers only accept writings, assignment, et cetera.

✓ Well, I used to like it a lot, yes, because I was a student and at university or high school teachers only accepted writings, assignments, et cetera.

The verb 'accept' should be in the past tense 'accepted' to match the past context indicated by 'used to' and 'was'. Also, 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to agree with 'writings' and the context of multiple tasks.

× Well, I used to like a lot, yes 'cause I was a student and at university or high school teachers only accept writings, assignment, et cetera.

✓ Well, I used to like it a lot, yes, because I was a student and at university or high school teachers only accepted writings, assignments, et cetera.

The word 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to correctly refer to multiple tasks, matching the plural 'writings' and the context.

× But right now, I rarely I only type on my computers.

✓ But right now, I rarely type; I only type on my computer.

The phrase 'type on my computers' is awkward; 'type on my computer' is more natural. Also, the sentence structure is corrected by removing the repeated 'I' and adding a semicolon for clarity.

× Well, I like to write on my notebook the To Do List of that days.

✓ Well, I like to write in my notebook the To Do List of those days.

The correct preposition with 'notebook' is 'in' rather than 'on'. Also, 'that days' should be 'those days' to correctly refer to plural days.

× Well, I like to write on my notebook the To Do List of that days.

✓ Well, I like to write in my notebook the To Do List of those days.

'Days' is plural, so the demonstrative adjective should be 'those' instead of 'that'.

× You know writing down and check the boxes give me a feeling of fulfillment rather than type on the notes on my phone or laptop.

✓ You know, writing down and checking the boxes gives me a feeling of fulfillment rather than typing notes on my phone or laptop.

The verbs should be in parallel gerund forms: 'writing', 'checking', and 'typing'. Also, 'type on the notes' is incorrect; it should be 'typing notes'. The verb 'gives' agrees with the singular subject 'writing down and checking the boxes' considered as one activity.

× You know writing down and check the boxes give me a feeling of fulfillment rather than type on the notes on my phone or laptop.

✓ You know, writing down and checking the boxes gives me a feeling of fulfillment rather than typing notes on my phone or laptop.

After 'and', verbs should be in the same form; 'writing' and 'checking' are gerunds here. Also, 'type' should be 'typing' to maintain parallel structure.

× I really think about it seriously.

✓ I really think about it seriously.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed.

× Most days I only arrive about work and so oh but sometimes I do write about to write a shopping list, so I do think it change to different occasions.

✓ Most days I only arrive at work, but sometimes I do write a shopping list, so I do think it changes depending on different occasions.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect; it should be 'at' for 'arrive at work'. The phrase 'write about to write' is incorrect; it should be 'write a shopping list'. Also, 'it change' should be 'it changes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'to different occasions' is better expressed as 'depending on different occasions'.

× Most days I only arrive about work and so oh but sometimes I do write about to write a shopping list, so I do think it change to different occasions.

✓ Most days I only arrive at work, but sometimes I do write a shopping list, so I do think it changes depending on different occasions.

The verb 'change' should be 'changes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'it'.

× Most days I only arrive about work and so oh but sometimes I do write about to write a shopping list, so I do think it change to different occasions.

✓ Most days I only arrive at work, but sometimes I do write a shopping list, so I do think it changes depending on different occasions.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect; 'arrive' is followed by 'at' when referring to a place.

× It really depends actually.

✓ It really depends, actually.

The sentence is correct; only a comma is added for clarity.

× If I want to like I mentions, if it says To Do List, I would prefer jotting down on a physically notebook.

✓ If I want to, like I mentioned, if it says To Do List, I would prefer jotting down on a physical notebook.

'Mentions' should be past tense 'mentioned' to match the context. 'Physically' is an adverb; the adjective 'physical' is correct to describe 'notebook'.

× If I want to like I mentions, if it says To Do List, I would prefer jotting down on a physically notebook.

✓ If I want to, like I mentioned, if it says To Do List, I would prefer jotting down on a physical notebook.

The adverb 'physically' is incorrectly used; the adjective 'physical' should be used to modify 'notebook'.

× But like when I want to write a long passage or messaging, typing is to go for.

✓ But when I want to write a long passage or message, typing is the way to go.

'Messaging' is a noun but here 'message' (verb or noun) fits better. The phrase 'typing is to go for' is incorrect; the idiomatic expression is 'typing is the way to go'.