写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“really write on paper”应为“rarely write on paper”，“always texting and send”应保持时态一致。建议注意时态一致性和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

示例: No, I rarely write on paper because I find it time-consuming and challenging. Instead, I usually text or send voice messages to my friends and family to keep in touch.

建议: 回答中“sending my access to my classmates”表达不清晰，可能是想说“sharing my work”。建议使用更准确的词汇表达，并且补充具体细节使内容更丰富。

示例: I prefer writing articles and essays because, as a college student, I often discuss new topics in my field. I like to share my ideas by sending my essays to my classmates for feedback.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，如“as my age getting older”应为“as I get older”，以及“affect my affect”重复。建议注意语法准确性，并且可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I do. As I get older, my experiences and viewpoints will change, which will definitely influence the topics I write about.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“more easier”应为“easier”，“make change changes”重复。建议避免重复用词，注意形容词比较级的正确使用，并且句子结构应更完整。

示例: Actually, I prefer typing because it is easier and more convenient to edit and make changes online. Also, digital documents are easy to store and share.

× I really write on paper.

✓ I don't really write on paper.

句子缺少否定，表达意思应为“我不常用纸写字”，需要加上助动词和否定词。

× I always texting and send voice messages to my friends and families to stay in touch with them.

✓ I am always texting and sending voice messages to my friends and family to stay in touch with them.

动词时态和形式错误，表示习惯动作时应使用现在进行时的动名词形式。

× send voice messages to my friends and families

✓ send voice messages to my friends and family

family作为不可数名词或集合名词时不加复数形式。

× I always need to discuss some new topics in my area and I would like to share my ideas by sending my access to my classmates.

✓ I always need to discuss some new topics in my area and I would like to share my ideas by giving my access to my classmates.

动词搭配错误，应该用give access而不是send access。

× as my age getting older

✓ as I get older

表达“随着年龄增长”应使用主语+动词的结构，不能用名词+动词ing形式。

× Therefore it will affect my affect what I write about.

✓ Therefore it will affect what I write about.

句子结构混乱，重复使用“affect”，应删除多余部分使句子通顺。

× I think it is more easier and convenient to edit and make change changes online.

✓ I think it is easier and more convenient to edit and make changes online.

比较级错误，“more easier”是错误用法，应使用“easier”；“change changes”重复，应为“changes”。

× Digital documents are easy to store and share using.

✓ Digital documents are easy to store and share.

“using”多余，句子应直接结束，表达“数字文档易于存储和分享”。