写作— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you write a lot?
考生
When I was a child, especially during my primary school, I wrote a lot because I kept diary every day and I liked to share my thoughts with my mom. However, when I grew up, I was busy with my studies and other activities, so I really find time to write.
考官
What do you like to write? Why?
考生
When I was a child, I used to keep dairy and I recorded daily events and some simple thoughts. However, now I mainly write academic essays related to my major because they are important for my studies and sometimes I also write to participate in competitions or events.
考官
Do you think the things you write would change?
考生
Yes, I believe the things I write would change over time because my ideas and interests evolved as I grow. For example, when I was a child I want to be an artist who can perform on TV show and now I just want to be a lawyer who can help disadvantaged people to protect their rights.
考官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
考生
Actually, it depends. I like handwriting when I keep my diary because it is more sentimental and personal. However, when I write academic essays, I usually type because it is much faster and more efficient, especially when I have a lot of work to finish.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
分数: 75.0建议: 回答时时态使用不够准确，且表达略显冗长。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，同时简化句子结构，使回答更自然流畅。
示例: I used to write a lot during primary school because I kept a diary and enjoyed sharing my thoughts with my mom. However, now I rarely find time to write due to my busy studies and activities.
What do you like to write? Why?
分数: 80.0建议: 回答内容较完整，但“dairy”拼写错误，应为“diary”。建议注意拼写准确性，同时可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯。
示例: When I was a child, I used to keep a diary where I recorded daily events and simple thoughts. Now, I mainly write academic essays related to my major because they are important for my studies, and sometimes I write for competitions or events.
Do you think the things you write would change?
分数: 70.0建议: 时态使用不准确，且表达不够连贯。建议注意时态一致性，使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富细节描述。
示例: Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time because my ideas and interests evolve as I grow. For example, when I was a child, I wanted to be an artist performing on TV shows, but now I aspire to be a lawyer who helps disadvantaged people protect their rights.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
分数: 85.0建议: 回答较好，但可以增加更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富词汇表达。
示例: Actually, it depends. I prefer handwriting when I keep my diary because it feels more sentimental and personal. However, I usually type academic essays since it is faster and more efficient, especially when I have a lot of work to complete.
语法
× so I really find time to write.
✓ so I really found time to write.
这里描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。原句中使用了现在时态“find”，应改为过去时态“found”。
× I kept diary every day
✓ I kept a diary every day
“diary”是可数名词，表示一本日记，前面需要加不定冠词“a”。
× I used to keep dairy and I recorded daily events and some simple thoughts.
✓ I used to keep a diary and I recorded daily events and some simple thoughts.
“dairy”是“乳制品”的意思，应该是“diary”（日记），且“diary”是可数名词，前面需要加不定冠词“a”。
× my ideas and interests evolved as I grow.
✓ my ideas and interests evolve as I grow.
这里描述的是一般现在时的事实，应该用一般现在时“evolve”，而不是过去时“evolved”。
× when I was a child I want to be an artist who can perform on TV show
✓ when I was a child I wanted to be an artist who could perform on TV shows
描述过去的愿望，应该用过去时“wanted”，且“TV show”应为复数“TV shows”，表示电视节目。
× now I just want to be a lawyer who can help disadvantaged people to protect their rights.
✓ now I just want to be a lawyer who can help disadvantaged people protect their rights.
动词“help”后面接动词时，通常不加“to”，直接用动词原形。
× I like handwriting when I keep my diary because it is more sentimental and personal.
✓ I like handwriting when I keep my diary because it is more sentimental and personal.
此句无语法错误，符合语法规则。
× I usually type because it is much faster and more efficient, especially when I have a lot of work to finish.
✓ I usually type because it is much faster and more efficient, especially when I have a lot of work to finish.
此句无语法错误，符合语法规则。
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