写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'ride' instead of 'write' and repeated words. To improve, focus on using correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and natural.

示例: Yes, I write quite often as it is part of my daily routine. I usually write in the morning or at night to record my experiences and thoughts.

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions. To improve, try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: I usually write about my daily experiences and feelings. This helps me reflect on my day, stay positive, and look forward to the future.

建议: Your answer has repetition and unclear phrasing. To improve, avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily and clarify your ideas. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise.

示例: Yes, I believe my writing habits will change over time. For example, I have started typing my journal entries on a computer instead of handwriting them, which feels more convenient for me now.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains some errors and awkward expressions, such as 'riding down the paper' instead of 'writing on paper' and 'feel much touch about on the paper.' To improve, use correct vocabulary and clearer expressions, and complete your sentences fully.

示例: It depends on my mood. When I feel down, I prefer writing on paper because it feels more personal. However, when I'm happy or short on time, I usually type on my computer.

× I do write frequently and I also think writing is is part of my routine so I usually will ride in the morning or even at night just because I have to write down my journey to.

✓ I do write frequently and I also think writing is part of my routine so I usually will write in the morning or even at night just because I have to write down my journey too.

The word 'ride' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'write' to match the context. Also, 'to' at the end should be 'too' to mean 'also'. The repeated 'is is' is a typo and should be corrected to a single 'is'.

× I usually will ride in the morning or even at night just because I have to write down my journey to.

✓ I usually will write in the morning or even at night just because I have to write down my journey too.

The preposition 'to' at the end is incorrect; it should be 'too' to indicate 'also'.

× So usually when I write, I just write about my write down in my journey and most of the time that will be something what I feel today and most of my opinion on something that happened today and just want to reflect myself and to stay overnight and positive and to looking forward to.

✓ So usually when I write, I just write down my journey and most of the time it will be about what I feel today and most of my opinions on something that happened today. I just want to reflect on myself, stay optimistic, and look forward to the future.

The sentence has several pronoun and word choice errors: 'write about my write down' is redundant and incorrect; 'that will be something what I feel' should be 'it will be about what I feel'; 'most of my opinion' should be 'most of my opinions'; 'reflect myself' should be 'reflect on myself'; 'stay overnight and positive' is incorrect, likely meant 'stay optimistic'; 'to looking forward to' should be 'look forward to'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I just want to reflect myself and to stay overnight and positive and to looking forward to.

✓ I just want to reflect on myself, stay optimistic, and look forward to the future.

The phrase 'to looking forward to' is incorrect; it should be 'look forward to'. Also, 'reflect myself' should be 'reflect on myself'. 'Stay overnight and positive' is incorrect; likely intended 'stay optimistic'.

× Yes I do. I do. I do think the thing I like would change, such as writing.

✓ Yes I do. I do think the things I like would change, such as writing.

'The thing I like' should be plural 'the things I like' to match the context of multiple interests changing.

× So instead of writing now I'm starting to use a computer, just type on my digital journey and to reflect myself.

✓ So instead of writing, now I'm starting to use a computer, just typing on my digital journal and reflecting on myself.

'Just type' should be 'just typing' to maintain parallel structure with 'starting to use'. 'Digital journey' is likely a miswording for 'digital journal'. 'Reflect myself' should be 'reflect on myself'.

× So I think the thing I used to like about really will change just like I switch.

✓ So I think the things I used to like about writing will really change just like I switched.

'The thing' should be plural 'the things' to match context. 'About really will change' is awkward; corrected to 'will really change'. 'Just like I switch' should be past tense 'just like I switched'.

× Oh, that's a good question. That really depends on my mood. So when I feel down, I actually prefer riding down the paper because I just feel much touch about on the paper and when I feel happy or even I don't have time, I just will type it down on my computer and.

✓ Oh, that's a good question. That really depends on my mood. So when I feel down, I actually prefer writing on paper because I just feel more connected to the paper, and when I feel happy or even if I don't have time, I just type it on my computer.

'Riding down the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'writing on paper'. 'Feel much touch about on the paper' is unclear and corrected to 'feel more connected to the paper'. 'I just will type it down' is awkward; corrected to 'I just type it'. Also, 'even I don't have time' should be 'even if I don't have time'.