写作— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you write a lot?
考生
No, I usually don't write because I'm not the person that enjoys recording my life by words. I prefer to record my life by taking videos or sending messages with my friends.
考官
What do you like to write? Why?
考生
Actually, I prefer to write down my feelings at the moment that I have. Been moved because the move feeling is very valuable for me to consider what I.
考官
Do you think the things you write would change?
考生
Yes, I think it will change as the time goes by because in different life stages people want to write down different things in their different life stages to record the moments of their currently life.
考官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
考生
I prefer handwriting when I want to write something, definitely because handwriting can help me calm myself down and consider myself in a more focused way. For example, when I feel really sad, I can raise my emotion down to.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答中表达了观点，但语言不够自然，句子结构有些生硬，且部分表达不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复和冗长。
示例: No, I don't write much because I prefer capturing my life through videos or chatting with friends rather than writing it down.
What do you like to write? Why?
分数: 50.0建议: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢写什么及原因，注意语法和句子完整性。
示例: I like to write about my feelings because they help me understand myself better at that moment.
Do you think the things you write would change?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答内容较完整，但句子较长且重复，表达不够简洁。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，避免重复。
示例: Yes, I believe what I write changes over time because at different stages of life, people focus on different experiences to record.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答表达了观点和原因，但最后一句不完整且用词不当。建议注意句子完整性和用词准确，表达更自然。
示例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me calm down and focus. For example, when I'm feeling sad, writing by hand helps me manage my emotions.
语法
× Been moved because the move feeling is very valuable for me to consider what I.
✓ I have been moved because the moving feeling is very valuable for me to consider what I feel.
原句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子结构不完整。应补充主语“I”和谓语“have been moved”，并将“move feeling”改为“moving feeling”以表达正确的形容词形式。
× ...people want to write down different things in their different life stages to record the moments of their currently life.
✓ ...people want to write down different things in their different life stages to record the moments of their current life.
“currently”是副词，不能修饰名词“life”，应改为形容词“current”。
× I can raise my emotion down to.
✓ I can calm my emotions down.
“raise”意为“提升”，与“down”搭配不当，表达情绪降低应使用“calm down”。此外，“emotion”应使用复数形式“emotions”更合适。
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