写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and keep it concise. For example, instead of repeating 'writing' multiple times, you can use synonyms or restructure sentences. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: No, I don't write much as I find it challenging and time-consuming. Instead, I rely on technology like voice messages and texts to communicate quickly with my friends and family.

建议: Your answer covers multiple points but is a bit long and lacks linking words to connect ideas. Try to use connectors like 'because', 'and', or 'which' to make your answer more coherent and concise.

示例: I like writing essays because they help me organize my thoughts and share my knowledge with others, which also improves my writing skills and critical thinking.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'things that are right' should be 'things that I write'. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'as' to connect your points better.

示例: Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time because my perspectives and experiences evolve as I grow older. Also, future technological advancements may introduce new writing tools and formats.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains minor errors like 'specially' instead of 'especially' and 'percent' instead of 'process'. Also, try to use linking words such as 'because', 'which', and 'additionally' correctly to improve coherence.

示例: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and time-saving, especially for long documents. It allows me to easily edit my work, which improves quality. Additionally, digital files are easy to store and share, making the whole process more efficient.

× I depend on technology such as voice, messages and text to stay connected with my friends and family and this is the way I can communicate quickly without spending too much time on writing.

✓ I depend on technology such as voice messages and texts to stay connected with my friends and family, and this is the way I can communicate quickly without spending too much time writing.

The phrase 'voice, messages and text' is incorrect because 'voice messages' and 'texts' are the correct compound nouns. Also, 'spending too much time on writing' should be 'spending too much time writing' as 'time' is followed by a gerund without 'on'. Additionally, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate the clauses properly.

× Yes, I like writing essays because it helps me to organize my thoughts on a topic and by writing articles I can share my knowledge and opinions with others and it is a way to improve my writing skills and critical thinking.

✓ Yes, I like writing essays because it helps me organize my thoughts on a topic, and by writing articles, I can share my knowledge and opinions with others. It is also a way to improve my writing skills and critical thinking.

The phrase 'helps me to organize' is acceptable but 'helps me organize' is more natural. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity. The sentence was long and needed to be split for better structure.

× Yes, I believe the things that are right will definitely change over time.

✓ Yes, I believe the things that are written will definitely change over time.

The word 'right' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'written' to refer to things that are written down. This is a vocabulary choice rather than a grammar tense issue, but correcting it clarifies the meaning.

× As I grow older, my perspectives and experiences are evolved.

✓ As I grow older, my perspectives and experiences evolve.

The verb 'are evolved' is incorrect because 'evolve' is an intransitive verb and does not take the passive form here. The correct present tense active form is 'evolve'.

× Additionally, future technological advancements might also change the way of writing and by introducing new tools and formats.

✓ Additionally, future technological advancements might also change the way we write by introducing new tools and formats.

The phrase 'the way of writing' is incorrect; it should be 'the way we write'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.

× I prefer typing because it is more convenient and time saving, specially when working on long documents.

✓ I prefer typing because it is more convenient and time-saving, especially when working on long documents.

'time saving' should be hyphenated as 'time-saving' when used as an adjective. 'specially' is incorrect; the correct word is 'especially'.

× Additionally, digital files are easy to store and share with others, making the whole percent much more efficient.

✓ Additionally, digital files are easy to store and share with others, making the whole process much more efficient.

The word 'percent' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'process'. This is a vocabulary error affecting pronoun reference.