写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有些重复，且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题，避免重复提问，并注意语法正确性，如使用正确的时态和单复数形式。

示例: No, I don't write a lot. I usually write only when necessary, such as sending emails to my teacher or working on important projects and documents.

建议: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: When I was a child, I liked writing diaries because I found it interesting to record my thoughts and personal experiences of the day.

建议: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，且句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意时态一致，并用连接词使表达更清晰。

示例: Yes, I do. When I was young, I liked writing diaries about my personal experiences, but as I grew older, the things I write changed from entertainment to more formal topics, such as emails to my teacher or school projects.

建议: 回答内容较好，但有些表达不够地道，且有重复词汇。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用更自然的短语。

示例: I prefer typing because it is more convenient and portable. You only need a smartphone or computer, and it's easy to correct mistakes without wasting paper.

× I only write if the things is necessary, like write an e-mail to my teacher or handle some important project and documents.

✓ I only write if the things are necessary, like writing an e-mail to my teacher or handling some important projects and documents.

这里'the things'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。此外，'project'应为复数'projects'以匹配上下文。动词后接动名词形式更符合表达习惯。

× When I was a young kid, I like to write and I write some Diaries.

✓ When I was a young kid, I liked to write and I wrote some diaries.

描述过去的动作时，动词应使用过去时态，'like'应改为'liked'，'write'应改为'wrote'。此外，'Diaries'不需要大写。

× I think that's interesting to record the thoughts and personal experience that day.

✓ I think it's interesting to record the thoughts and personal experiences of that day.

'experience'应为复数形式'experiences'以匹配'thoughts'，且表达更自然。

× When I was young I like write diary about my personal experience, but when I get older the things I write change from entertainment to formal.

✓ When I was young I liked to write diaries about my personal experiences, but when I got older the things I wrote changed from entertainment to formal.

描述过去时态，动词应使用过去式，'like'改为'liked'，'write'改为'wrote'，'get'改为'got'，'change'改为'changed'。'diary'应为复数'diaries'，'experience'应为复数'experiences'。

× Like write an e-mail to my teacher or some projects about my schoolwork.

✓ Like writing an e-mail to my teacher or some projects about my schoolwork.

'Like'后接动名词形式更符合表达习惯，应改为'writing'。

× And if you make some mistakes on it, you can easily handle them without waste wasting any paper.

✓ And if you make some mistakes on it, you can easily handle them without wasting any paper.

'without'后应接动名词形式，'waste'应改为'wasting'。