写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯，表达不自然，且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和不完整的句子。

示例: No, I don't write a lot because nowadays smartphones are very convenient, so I rarely use a pen to write.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意语法正确。

示例: I like to write math problems on paper because it helps me focus better without the distraction of my smartphone.

建议: 回答内容较好，但有语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致和句子流畅性。

示例: Yes, the things I write have changed over time because as I gain more experience and knowledge, my writing style tends to evolve. For example, I used to write long stories when I was younger, but now I prefer shorter pieces that express my current thoughts.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅。

示例: It depends on the task. For example, I prefer typing when taking notes in class because it's quick and convenient on my smartphone.

× Nowadays our phone is really convenient, so I seldom use pen to write something.

✓ Nowadays our phones are really convenient, so I seldom use a pen to write something.

“phone”应为复数形式“phones”，因为指的是一般的手机，不是特指一部手机；“pen”前应加不定冠词“a”，表示一支笔。

× I like to write in the paper.

✓ I like to write on the paper.

写在纸上应使用介词“on”，表示表面位置，而不是“in”。

× That is because I need to put my smartphone away to avoid myself to play the smartphone.

✓ That is because I need to put my smartphone away to avoid playing with the smartphone.

“avoid”后应接动名词形式，且“avoid myself to play”结构错误，应改为“avoid playing with”。

× Yes, I have, only the things I write would definitely change over time because as I gained more in experience and knowledge, my writing style tend to evolve.

✓ Yes, I have. Only the things I write would definitely change over time because as I gain more experience and knowledge, my writing style tends to evolve.

“gain”应为一般现在时“gain”，与时间状语“as”搭配；“style”是单数，谓语动词应为“tends”；“in experience”中“in”多余，应去掉。

× If I'm just taking notes in the class, I just prefer to typing because I think it's really convenient to type in the smartphones and really quick.

✓ If I'm just taking notes in class, I just prefer typing because I think it's really convenient to type on smartphones and it's really quick.

“in the class”应为“in class”或“at class”；“prefer to typing”错误，应为“prefer typing”；“type in the smartphones”应为“type on smartphones”；“really quick”应加主语和动词，改为“it's really quick”。