写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid filler phrases like 'I'm not sure why' and redundant expressions such as 'I have to think a lot of words for me to be able to get to write a good essay.'

示例: I don't write very often because I find it time-consuming. For example, when I write essays, I need to carefully choose my words, which takes a lot of effort.

建议: Begin with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary, such as 'posts' or 'captions' instead of 'codes.'

示例: Although I don't write often, I like to write short captions for my Instagram or TikTok posts because they help me express my emotions and feelings clearly.

建议: Your answer is good but could be improved by avoiding repetition and making the explanation more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a clear reason.

示例: Yes, I think my writing will change over time because nothing stays the same. For instance, my opinions and style might be different in the future compared to now.

建议: Try to correct grammatical errors and make your answer more fluent. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

示例: I prefer handwriting because it allows me to express my emotions better. When I write by hand, I feel more connected to the words compared to typing.

× Maybe because it's lengthy?

✓ Maybe because it's lengthy?

This sentence is a fragment and lacks a main verb, which is necessary for a complete sentence. However, since it is a question fragment used informally, it can be acceptable in spoken language. No correction needed based on the provided grammar problem types.

× I have to think a lot of words for me to be able to get to write a good essay.

✓ I have to think of a lot of words to be able to write a good essay.

The phrase 'a lot of words' requires the preposition 'of' after 'think' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'get to write' is unnecessary and awkward; 'to be able to write' suffices. The correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× What do you like to write? Why?

✓ What do you like to write? Why?

No grammatical error in this sentence based on the provided grammar problem types. The sentence is correct as is.

× I don't usually like to write but when I do, I would write some codes that I can put on my Instagram or Tiktok and most of it are just some emotions or feelings that I wanted to express.

✓ I don't usually like to write, but when I do, I write some codes that I can put on my Instagram or TikTok, and most of them are just emotions or feelings that I want to express.

The modal verb 'would' is incorrectly used here; 'would' implies conditional or habitual past action, but the present simple 'write' is appropriate. Also, 'most of it are' is incorrect; 'most of them are' agrees with the plural 'codes.' 'Wanted' should be 'want' to maintain present tense consistency.

× Yes, I believe the things that I wrote would change because there is no constant in this world except change, so writing is one of them.

✓ Yes, I believe the things that I write will change because there is no constant in this world except change, so writing is one of them.

The past tense 'wrote' is incorrect here because the speaker is referring to things they write in general or in the future. The present tense 'write' fits better. Also, 'would change' should be 'will change' to express future certainty.

× I I might write something now, this way, but in the future I might write a different one.

✓ I might write something this way now, but in the future, I might write a different one.

The repetition 'I I' is a typographical error. The adverb 'now' is better placed after 'this way' for natural flow. The sentence is otherwise correct.

× I always prefer handwriting when I'm writing because if I'm do using my hands in writing, I can put all my emotions to my writing.

✓ I always prefer handwriting when I'm writing because if I use my hands to write, I can put all my emotions into my writing.

The phrase 'if I'm do using' is incorrect; it should be 'if I use.' Also, 'put all my emotions to my writing' should be 'put all my emotions into my writing' to use the correct preposition.

× I can feel the words that I am writing unlike when I am typing.

✓ I can feel the words that I am writing, unlike when I am typing.

A comma is needed before 'unlike' to separate the clauses properly. The sentence is otherwise correct.