写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use more natural phrasing and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'to spend my best wishes writing this,' say 'to send my best wishes.' Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

示例: I don't usually write a lot because I prefer speaking or texting. However, I occasionally write letters to my friends and family on special occasions like birthdays, as I find letters more personal and meaningful.

建议: Make sure your sentences are clear and grammatically correct. Avoid repetition like 'I also I also.' Also, clarify unclear phrases such as 'keeping product.' Try to provide specific examples to support your answer.

示例: I like to write informal notes because it helps me relax and express my thoughts freely. I also usually write down my daily tasks and shopping lists to stay organised.

建议: Be careful with word choice and grammar, such as 'mighty swift' which should be 'might shift.' Also, try to use linking words like 'for example' and 'because' to make your answer more coherent.

示例: Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time. For example, at the moment I write about my future studies and courses I want to pursue, but as I gain more experience, my interests and topics might shift depending on my circumstances.

建议: Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Instead of 'I like to handwriting,' say 'I prefer handwriting.' Also, avoid informal fillers like 'Like' at the start of sentences. Try to link your ideas smoothly.

示例: I prefer handwriting when I write because it is an enjoyable and engaging activity for me. It helps reduce my daily stress and makes me feel more relaxed, so I usually choose handwriting over typing.

× I did not usually write a lot because I prefer speaking or texting.

✓ I did not usually write a lot because I preferred speaking or texting.

The sentence mixes past tense 'did not usually write' with present tense 'prefer'. To maintain tense consistency, 'prefer' should be changed to past tense 'preferred'.

× to spend my best wishes writing this.

✓ to send my best wishes by writing this.

The phrase 'spend my best wishes writing this' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'send' for wishes, and 'by writing this' indicates the method.

× I also I also usually write down many tasks like keeping product.

✓ I also usually write down many tasks, like keeping track of products.

The sentence has repetition 'I also I also' and unclear phrase 'keeping product'. Corrected to remove repetition and clarify meaning with 'keeping track of products'.

× Yes, I think the things I write will definitely change over the time.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write will definitely change over time.

The phrase 'over the time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'over time' without 'the'.

× my interest and topics mighty swift.

✓ my interests and topics might shift.

'mighty swift' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'might shift' to indicate possible change. Also, 'interest' should be plural 'interests' to match 'topics'.

× I like to handwriting when I was writing because it is very enjoyable and captivating active activity for me.

✓ I like handwriting when I write because it is a very enjoyable and captivating activity for me.

'like to handwriting' is incorrect; 'like handwriting' is correct. Also, 'when I was writing' should be 'when I write' to match present tense. 'active activity' is redundant; 'captivating activity' suffices.

× Like it's helped me to reduce my daily stress and make me more relaxed.

✓ It helps me reduce my daily stress and makes me more relaxed.

Starting a sentence with 'Like' is informal and unnecessary here. Also, verb tenses should be consistent: 'helps' and 'makes' in present tense.

× So usually I have referred to handwriting instead of typing.

✓ So usually I prefer handwriting instead of typing.

'have referred to handwriting' is incorrect in this context. The correct phrase is 'prefer handwriting' to express choice.