写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，建议用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复。可以直接回答问题，然后简要说明原因。

示例: No, I don't write a lot. When I was a student, I preferred reading books rather than writing.

建议: 回答结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议先明确表达喜欢写什么，然后给出具体原因，使用连词使句子更连贯。

示例: I like to write children's stories because I find science fiction too difficult to write. Children's stories are more interesting and easier for me to create.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复。

示例: No, I don't think what I write will change anything because I'm not a famous writer and my writings are not very important.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用更准确的表达，并且句子结构更清晰。

示例: I prefer handwriting because I'm not very good at typing, and writing by hand helps me develop my ideas better.

× When I was a student I usually read a book, but I don't often write anything.

✓ When I was a student, I usually read books, but I didn't often write anything.

这里描述过去的习惯动作，应该用过去时态。'read a book'应改为复数形式'books'表示经常读多本书，'don't often write'应改为过去时态'didn't often write'。

× I don't like to write some stories about children's stories because I think like fiction or science.

✓ I don't like to write stories about children's topics because I prefer fiction or science.

'some stories about children's stories'表达重复且不准确，应改为'stories about children's topics'。此外，'I think like fiction or science'表达不清，应改为'I prefer fiction or science'。

× Science fictions are too difficult for me.

✓ Science fiction is too difficult for me.

'Science fiction'是不可数名词，不能用复数形式'science fictions'。

× So I would like to write some interesting children's story.

✓ So I would like to write some interesting children's stories.

'children's story'应使用复数形式'stories'，因为前面用了'some'表示复数。

× No, I don't because I'm not a famous writer and.

✓ No, I don't because I'm not a famous writer.

句子末尾多余的'and'导致句子结构不完整，应去掉。

× The things what I'm right is just not very important, so I think it won't change everything, anything.

✓ The things that I'm writing are just not very important, so I think they won't change anything.

'what'用法错误，应改为'relative pronoun that'。'right'应为'writing'。'The things'为复数，谓语动词应用复数'are'。'it'应改为'they'指代复数。'change everything, anything'表达重复，应只用'anything'。

× I prefer handwriting because I'm not very good at typing on the keyboard and also I think on the handwriting can maybe make my idea expand so that I can ride better things.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I'm not very good at typing on the keyboard, and also I think handwriting can help my ideas expand so that I can write better things.

'on the handwriting'用法错误，应直接用'handwriting'。'ride'应为'write'。句子中缺少逗号分隔。