写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「makes me more easier」は誤りで、「makes it easier」などが適切です。また、内容がやや冗長で、より簡潔に表現することが望ましいです。

示例: Yes, I write a lot, especially during classes and when studying, because writing things down helps me memorize information more easily.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法ミス（"informations"は不可算名詞なので"information"が正しい）や不自然な表現があります。また、内容がやや単調で、より具体的な理由や例を加えると良いでしょう。

示例: I usually like taking notes on what teachers say because these notes help me prepare for tests and improve my scores.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです（"a new information"は不可算名詞なので"new information"が正しい、"inform"は三人称単数形で"informs"が正しいなど）。また、文章が長くなりすぎているため、簡潔に分けて話すと良いでしょう。

示例: Yes, I believe what we write can change over time, especially when we add new information. However, my teacher advises us not to erase original notes because they might be useful later.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が目立ちます（"memorize easier"は"memorize more easily"が正しいなど）。また、内容がやや繰り返しで冗長なので、より簡潔で明確な表現を心がけましょう。

示例: I definitely prefer handwriting because it motivates me and helps me memorize information more effectively than typing.

× Yes, I do write a lot.

✓ Yes, I write a lot.

The phrase 'do write' is unnecessary for emphasis here and can be simplified to 'write' for natural expression.

× I write during my classes and especially when I'm studying because to be able to memorize, I have to write it down in a paper.

✓ I write during my classes and especially when I'm studying because to be able to memorize, I have to write it down on paper.

The correct preposition with 'paper' is 'on' not 'in'. 'Write it down on paper' is the standard expression.

× And so it makes me more easier to memorize the needs that I have to.

✓ And so it makes it easier for me to memorize the things that I need to.

'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; 'makes it easier for me to memorize the things I need to' is clearer.

× I normally like taking memos according to what the teachers will inform us because I think that will affect our test studies and scores, and so I take memos in order to memorize the important informations.

✓ I normally like taking memos based on what the teachers tell us because I think that will affect our test studies and scores, so I take memos to memorize the important information.

'According to' is better replaced with 'based on' or 'from' in this context. 'Inform us' should be 'tell us'. 'Informations' is uncountable and should be 'information'. Also, 'in order to memorize' can be simplified to 'to memorize'.

× I take memos in order to memorize the important informations.

✓ I take memos in order to memorize the important information.

'Information' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form.

× Yes, I think that everything you write down will change as time goes by, especially when you add a new information to it.

✓ Yes, I think that everything you write down will change as time goes by, especially when you add new information to it.

'Information' is uncountable and does not need 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the sentence.

× But my teacher always inform us to never erase the ones that you memoed in the 1st place because there's a time that you're gonna be needing that, and I think that's important too.

✓ But my teacher always informs us to never erase the ones that you wrote down in the first place because there will be a time when you're going to need them, and I think that's important too.

'Inform' should be 'informs' for subject-verb agreement. 'Memoed' is not standard; 'wrote down' is better. '1st' should be 'first'. 'There's a time that you're gonna be needing that' is awkward; 'there will be a time when you're going to need them' is clearer. Also, 'that' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'ones'.

× But my teacher always inform us to never erase the ones that you memoed in the 1st place because there's a time that you're gonna be needing that, and I think that's important too.

✓ But my teacher always informs us to never erase the ones that you wrote down in the first place because there will be a time when you're going to need them, and I think that's important too.

The verb 'inform' must agree with the singular subject 'teacher', so it should be 'informs'.

× I would definitely prefer handwriting. Handwriting gives you motivation of the things that you have to do and it makes you memorize easier especially when you are writing and together you can memorize the needed information that you have to put in your head.

✓ I would definitely prefer handwriting. Handwriting gives you motivation for the things that you have to do and makes it easier for you to memorize, especially when you are writing, and together you can memorize the needed information that you have to put in your head.

The phrase 'motivation of the things' should be 'motivation for the things'. Also, 'makes you memorize easier' should be 'makes it easier for you to memorize' for correct structure.