写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构有些混乱，建议简化句子并使用更自然的表达方式，同时避免重复。

示例: No, I don't write much these days because I usually type messages on my phone instead of writing by hand.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够清晰，建议注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I usually write notes to remind myself of important things and complete my homework. I prefer typing these notes on my phone or computer because it's faster.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议练习完整表达观点，使用正确时态和连词，使内容更具体。

示例: Yes, the things I write have changed. When I was young, I wrote about my daily experiences and feelings, but now I write more about my thoughts and future plans.

建议: 回答较为完整，但句子结构和语法有待改进。建议使用连接词增强逻辑性，并注意时态一致性。

示例: I used to prefer handwriting when I was a child because I didn't have a mobile phone. Now, I prefer typing because it's more convenient and saves time. I often type important notes on my phone, which also reminds me of tasks.

× No, I don't write a lot with the development of the mobile phone.

✓ No, I don't write a lot because of the development of the mobile phone.

句中使用了介词短语 'with the development of the mobile phone'，表达原因时应使用 'because of'，而非 'with'。这是介词使用错误，属于介词使用错误。

× I usually use phone to type and send messages instead of writing.

✓ I usually use my phone to type and send messages instead of writing.

缺少冠词 'my'，表示特指自己的手机。名词前缺少限定词，属于量词使用错误。

× I usually write when I to complete my homework and write a note to myself to remind me of something important.

✓ I usually write when I need to complete my homework and write a note to myself to remind me of something important.

句中缺少动词 'need'，导致句子结构不完整，属于句子结构错误。

× And I usually use mobile phone and computers to type this.

✓ And I usually use my mobile phone and computer to type this.

缺少限定词 'my'，且 'computers' 应为单数 'computer'，表示特指自己的设备，属于量词使用错误。

× Of course, when I was young I usually write simple things like daily experience and some feelings, and as I grow up and experience different things and now you should write something about the.

✓ Of course, when I was young I usually wrote simple things like daily experiences and some feelings, and as I grew up and experienced different things, now I should write something about them.

时态错误，描述过去的事情应使用过去时；'experience' 应为复数 'experiences'；句尾缺少宾语，且 'you' 应为 'I'，属于动词时态错误和代词使用错误。

× When I was a child I preferred handwriting because I didn't have the mobile phone and now I prefer typing.

✓ When I was a child, I preferred handwriting because I didn't have a mobile phone, and now I prefer typing.

缺少逗号分隔从句，'the mobile phone' 应为 'a mobile phone'，表示泛指，属于冠词错误。

× I think typing is more convenient and save my time and usually I type for some important things on my phone and it can remind me.

✓ I think typing is more convenient and saves my time. Usually, I type some important things on my phone, and it can remind me.

主谓不一致，'save' 应为 'saves'；句子过长，建议分句；'for some important things' 中 'for' 不必要，属于量词和介词使用错误。