写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct articles and plural forms, and avoid redundancy. Also, organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

示例: Yes, I write quite a lot, especially about chemistry and biology. For instance, in chemistry, I write about atomic and chemical structures, while in biology, I focus on the skeletal and muscular systems.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to give a direct answer with a clear reason, and avoid repeating or confusing phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: I like to write about biology because there is a lot of information I can find in books. It interests me more than chemistry, so I prefer writing about biology topics.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Avoid unnecessary repetition and use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I don't think the topics I write about will change because I enjoy biology. However, my mother believes I might switch to history since I am also good at writing about that subject.

建议: Your answer has good content but is affected by grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and link your ideas clearly. Also, explain your preferences with reasons.

示例: When I was a child, I preferred handwriting because I only had a notebook. However, now that I am an adult, I prefer typing because it saves me a lot of time.

× Yes, I write a lot specially on chemistry and biology.

✓ Yes, I write a lot especially on chemistry and biology.

The word 'specially' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'especially' to indicate emphasis or particular focus.

× For example an chemistry I write about atomic and chemical structure.

✓ For example, in chemistry I write about atomic and chemical structure.

The article 'an' is incorrectly used before 'chemistry' which is an uncountable noun; also, a preposition 'in' is needed to indicate the subject area.

× On biology I rights especially on skeleton system and muscular system.

✓ In biology, I write especially about the skeletal system and muscular system.

The verb 'rights' is incorrect; the correct form is 'write' for first person singular. Also, 'on biology' should be 'in biology', and 'skeleton system' should be 'skeletal system'. The definite article 'the' is needed before 'skeletal system' and 'muscular system'.

× I like to write about. Biology.

✓ I like to write about biology.

The sentence is fragmented; the period after 'about' is incorrect and should be removed to form a complete sentence.

× Because there is a lot of information I can collect from book and right.

✓ Because there is a lot of information I can collect from books and write about.

The singular 'book' should be plural 'books' to match 'a lot of information'. Also, 'right' is a misspelling of 'write', and 'write about' is the correct phrase.

× There are two things we just said. Suspected to write it about the biology alchemistry.

✓ There are two things we just said. I am supposed to write about biology and chemistry.

The sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Suspected to write it about the biology alchemistry' is incorrect; it should be 'I am supposed to write about biology and chemistry' to convey the intended meaning.

× In my opinion I think no, but my mother she thinking.

✓ In my opinion, I think no, but my mother is thinking.

The verb 'thinking' needs an auxiliary verb 'is' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'she' is redundant and should be removed.

× I will be a payment if I change.

✓ I will be paid if I change.

The phrase 'will be a payment' is incorrect; the correct passive form is 'will be paid' to indicate receiving payment.

× My thinking too, right?

✓ I think so too, right?

'My thinking too' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I think so too' to express agreement.

× Like if I change or sustain from biology to history because I am smart to write in history.

✓ Like if I change or switch from biology to history because I am good at writing in history.

The verb 'sustain' is incorrect here; 'switch' or 'change' is appropriate. Also, 'smart to write' is ungrammatical; 'good at writing' is correct.

× When I was child.

✓ When I was a child.

The article 'a' is missing before 'child'.

× I preferred handwriting because there's this only I have a notebook,

✓ I preferred handwriting because I only had a notebook,

The phrase 'there's this only I have a notebook' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I only had a notebook' to express possession in the past.

× but when I. Come in. Adult I think typing is a preferred because saving my time to write loads.

✓ but when I became an adult, I think typing is preferred because it saves me time when writing a lot.

The sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. 'Come in Adult' should be 'became an adult'. 'Is a preferred' should be 'is preferred'. 'Saving my time to write loads' should be 'it saves me time when writing a lot'.