写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不够自然，比如“writing diary”应为“writing a diary”，句子结构也较为混乱。建议简化句子结构，注意冠词和时态的使用，使表达更流畅自然。

示例: Not really. However, I have a habit of writing a diary every night. I usually spend about 10 minutes recording my daily life.

建议: 回答内容不够清晰，表达混乱，缺少连贯性。建议使用完整句子，明确表达喜欢写什么和原因，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I like to write about what happened during the day and the highlights. Also, I record my feelings and important moments because they help me remember special experiences.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整的问题，如“an develop”应为“and develop”，句子结构不够清晰。建议注意连词的使用，表达更完整的想法。

示例: It depends. I want to write more articles and develop my diary into something like a novel. However, I know I need to practice more and read more books to improve.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误，如“before I turn I entering”应为“before I entered”。建议注意时态和句子结构，使表达更准确。

示例: Before I entered college, I preferred handwriting. But after starting college, I found typing on a computer more convenient and faster for expressing my thoughts.

× I have a habit of writing diary every night

✓ I have a habit of writing a diary every night

“diary”是可数名词，表示一本日记，前面需要加冠词“a”。

× I will spend about 10 minutes to write my diary for record documenting my. Daily life.

✓ I spend about 10 minutes writing my diary to record my daily life.

动词“spend”后应接动名词形式“writing”，而不是不定式“to write”。另外，“for record documenting my daily life”表达不自然，改为“to record my daily life”更合适。

× it's just son, no more things about what happens today and what's my highlight.

✓ It's just some notes about what happened today and what my highlight was.

“son”应为“some”，“things”应改为“notes”或“things”，且“what happens”时态应与上下文一致，改为过去时“happened”。

× what my feeling was an.

✓ what my feeling was.

句子不完整，去掉多余的“an”使句子完整且符合语法。

× I also like to record some very important moment today.

✓ I also like to record some very important moments today.

“moment”应为复数形式“moments”，因为前面有“some”表示复数。

× I really want to write more. Articles an develop my diary into more like a novel or the compose.

✓ I really want to write more articles and develop my diary into something more like a novel or a composition.

“Articles”不应大写，且“an”应为“and”，“the compose”应改为“a composition”更合适。

× before I turn I entering into college, I prefer to write by my hand,

✓ Before I entered college, I preferred to write by hand,

“turn I entering”结构错误，应改为过去时“entered”；“write by my hand”应为“write by hand”。

× after getting to college I found it more convenient and faster to type my thoughts into a computer.

✓ After getting to college, I found it more convenient and faster to type my thoughts on a computer.

“into a computer”不自然，通常说“type on a computer”。