写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且内容不够具体。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并且直接回答问题。

示例: Yes, I write a lot because it is an essential part of my studies. I usually write essays and reports for my homework.

建议: 回答内容混乱，语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达喜欢写故事或小说的原因，并使用连词使句子连贯。

示例: I like to write stories or novels because they are more interesting and creative than essays. They allow me to use my imagination.

建议: 回答中语法和表达错误较多，内容不够具体。建议明确说明写作会改进的方面，并用连词连接句子。

示例: Yes, I think my writing will improve over time. It will become more logical and interesting because I learn from my mistakes.

建议: 回答表达不流畅，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并给出具体原因，使用连词连接句子。

示例: I prefer typing because I can write faster and my handwriting is hard to read.

× I always writes the passage Oh Ric for my homework.

✓ I always write the passage Oh Ric for my homework.

主语是第一人称单数'I'，谓语动词应使用原形write，而不是第三人称单数形式writes。

× I pray for write the story or noble because it is more interesting than the passage or I say an because it have the different different.

✓ I prefer to write stories or novels because they are more interesting than passages or essays because they have different differences.

动词'prefer'后应接不定式'to write'，而不是'for write'。名词'noble'应为'novel'。句子结构混乱，需调整以表达清晰。

× I pray for write the story or noble because it is more interesting than the passage or I say an because it have the different different.

✓ I prefer to write stories or novels because they are more interesting than passages or essays because they have different differences.

名词复数形式错误，'story'应为'stories'，'noble'应为'novels'，'passage'应为'passages'，'I say an'应为'essays'。

× Did it have the times and?

✓ Does it have the times and?

疑问句中应使用助动词'does'来构成一般现在时，'Did'用于一般过去时，与上下文时态不符。

× Yes, I saying Kimmy right, so it would be more logical and and the more interest team, because sometimes my novel was logic is very terrible.

✓ Yes, I am saying it correctly, so it would be more logical and more interesting, because sometimes my novel's logic is very terrible.

代词使用错误，'I saying Kimmy right'应为'I am saying it correctly'，'interest team'应为'interesting'。

× I pray for the typing because when I typing I can tap more the words an O and the other reason is the my handwriting is is is difficult to identify.

✓ I prefer typing because when I type I can tap more words, and the other reason is my handwriting is difficult to identify.

动词'prefer'后应接动名词'typing'，'when I typing'应为'when I type'，'tap more the words an O'表达不清，改为'can tap more words'。