写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하며, 주제에 직접적으로 답하는 문장으로 시작하세요. 예를 들어, 'Yes, I write a lot, especially for work.'와 같이 표현하는 것이 좋습니다.

示例: Yes, I write a lot, especially for my work. I often write articles and reports to communicate important information.

建议: 답변이 문법적으로 부정확하고 내용이 혼란스럽습니다. 좋아하는 글쓰기 종류와 이유를 명확하게 표현하고, 구체적인 이유를 덧붙여 보세요. 예를 들어, 'I like writing newspaper articles because I enjoy sharing news with others.'

示例: I like writing newspaper articles because I enjoy sharing news and stories with many people. It helps me improve my writing skills and stay informed.

建议: 답변이 매우 불명확하고 문법적으로 맞지 않습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 변화에 대한 자신의 생각을 명확하게 표현하세요. 예를 들어, 'Yes, I think my writing style changes as I gain more experience.'

示例: Yes, I think the things I write change over time. As I gain more experience, I try to write more clearly and effectively.

建议: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만 문법과 표현이 다소 어색합니다. 이유를 명확히 하고 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'I prefer typing because my handwriting is not very neat, so typing is easier to read.'

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is messy. Typing helps me write faster and makes my work easier to read.

× When I work, I'd wiped off an article for.

✓ When I work, I write an article.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'd wiped off', which is a past perfect tense and does not fit the context. The student likely intended to say they write articles when working, so the simple present tense 'I write' is appropriate here.

× When I work, I'd wiped off an article for.

✓ When I work, I write an article.

The sentence structure is incorrect and unclear. 'I'd wiped off an article for' is not a proper English phrase. Rephrasing to 'I write an article' clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× I like to write an article for newspaper.

✓ I like to write articles for the newspaper.

The preposition 'for' is correct, but 'newspaper' needs a definite article 'the' to specify it. Also, 'an article' should be plural 'articles' to express a general habit.

× My mother don't shut it off so.

✓ My mother doesn't throw it away.

'Don't' is incorrect for third person singular; it should be 'doesn't'. Also, 'shut it off' is not appropriate for discarding an article; 'throw it away' is the correct phrase.

× Do you think the things you write would change?

✓ Do you think the things you write will change?

The modal verb 'would' is used incorrectly here; 'will' is appropriate to express future possibility or expectation.

× I think that the things you are allowed to have change.

✓ I think that the things you write change.

The phrase 'you are allowed to have' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'you write' to match the question about writing. Also, 'change' is correct in present tense.

× Helping to happen, she makes it is more easier.

✓ By helping to make it happen, she makes it easier.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'More easier' is incorrect; 'easier' is the correct comparative form. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.

× I prefer typing to handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× My handwriting and writing is not good.

✓ My handwriting is not good.

'Handwriting and writing' is redundant; 'handwriting' alone suffices. Also, 'is' agrees with singular 'handwriting'.

× So typing is more convenient to. Read, read it.

✓ So typing is more convenient to read.

The phrase 'to. Read, read it.' is fragmented and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'more convenient to read' with proper word order and no unnecessary repetition.