写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but very brief. Try to add a reason or example to make your response more natural and informative. For example, explain why you don't write a lot or what kind of writing you usually do.

示例: No, I don't write a lot because I usually prefer to communicate verbally or through messages. However, I do write notes occasionally to remember important things.

建议: Your answer has some grammar and vocabulary errors and is a bit unclear. Try to use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

示例: I like to write important information that I need to remember because I often forget things. Since I started taking notes, it has helped me keep track of my tasks and appointments.

建议: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to speak in complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: No, I don't think the things I write would change. If we only keep information in our mind, we might forget it easily. But when we write it down in a notebook, we can remember it better and the information stays the same.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has some pauses and grammar issues. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

示例: I truly prefer handwriting to typing because writing by hand helps me remember information better. Also, it feels more personal and engaging than typing on a keyboard.

× I write us some important informations that I have to keep record.

✓ I write some important information that I have to keep record of.

The word 'informations' is incorrect because 'information' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, the phrase 'keep record' should be 'keep record of' to be grammatically correct.

× I used to forget a lot of things since I started to take a note.

✓ I used to forget a lot of things before I started to take notes.

The phrase 'since I started to take a note' is incorrect because 'used to' refers to past habits, so 'since' is not appropriate here. Also, 'take a note' should be plural 'take notes' to indicate multiple notes.

× So that's that's the thing I used to write.

✓ So that's the thing I used to write.

The repetition 'that's that's' is a mistake and should be corrected to a single 'that's'. No plural issue here, but the sentence needs correction for clarity.

× If we. Right in our mind, and we can. Forget easily, but if we write in our copy nones then we can remember or it would not change.

✓ If we write in our mind, we can forget easily, but if we write in our notebooks then we can remember and it will not change.

The sentence has several issues: 'Right' should be 'write'; 'copy nones' is incorrect and should be 'notebooks'; the sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be combined properly. Also, 'or it would not change' should be 'and it will not change' for correct meaning.

× No, I don't think so. If we. Right in our mind, and we can. Forget easily, but if we write in our copy nones then we can remember or it would not change.

✓ No, I don't think so. If we write in our mind, we can forget easily, but if we write in our notebooks then we can remember and it will not change.

The modal verb 'would' is used incorrectly here; 'will' is more appropriate to express certainty about the future.

× I truly prefer to write instead of typing.

✓ I truly prefer writing instead of typing.

After the verb 'prefer', the gerund form (verb + -ing) is commonly used when comparing activities, so 'prefer writing' is more natural than 'prefer to write' in this context.

× Writing helps too. Keep. In our mind about information more properly rather than typing.

✓ Writing helps to keep information in our mind more properly rather than typing.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing prepositions. 'Helps to keep' is the correct phrase, and 'information in our mind' is the proper prepositional phrase.