写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より明確で簡潔な文を使い、文法と語彙の正確さを向上させる必要があります。例えば、大学でのレポート作成について具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

示例: Yes, I write a lot because I am a university student. I often have to write reports for my classes, which can be challenging but important for my studies.

建议: 内容が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。自分の興味や将来の目標について、もっと明確で論理的に説明することが必要です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、意味をはっきりさせましょう。

示例: I like to write about business because I am studying it at university. In the future, I want to become a successful business director, so writing helps me improve my knowledge and skills.

建议: 回答が意味不明で、質問に直接答えていません。質問の意図を理解し、明確に答える練習が必要です。具体的な理由や例を使って説明しましょう。

示例: No, I don't think the topics I write about will change because I am focused on business studies. Writing essays and reports is important for my academic success.

建议: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、文章が断片的です。理由を明確に述べ、文をつなげて自然な回答にしましょう。

示例: I prefer typing because I have used a computer since high school. Typing is faster and more convenient for me than handwriting.

× Yes I do because I am at university student.

✓ Yes, I do because I am a university student.

The phrase 'university student' requires an article 'a' before it because it is a singular countable noun. Without the article, the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× Come in the class or with any ver city we have to do a lot of report.

✓ In class or at any university, we have to do a lot of reports.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and word order. 'Come in the class' should be 'in class' and 'ver city' is likely a misspelling of 'university'. Also, 'report' should be plural 'reports' because it refers to multiple assignments.

× To get. Set time.

✓ We have to meet deadlines.

The original fragment is incomplete and unclear. It seems to refer to deadlines or set times for assignments, so it is corrected to a complete sentence conveying that meaning.

× It is very difficult and.

✓ It is very difficult.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought. It should be a complete sentence.

× Actually I like to write about business becauses I am studying business and I in the future director become red business person.

✓ Actually, I like to write about business because I am studying business and I want to become a director and a business person in the future.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'becauses' should be 'because'; 'I in the future director become red business person' is ungrammatical and unclear. It is corrected to express the intended meaning clearly with proper conjunctions and verb forms.

× So I think. Fighting about messiness and makes me creeper and smart.

✓ So I think writing about business makes me more confident and smart.

The phrase 'Fighting about messiness' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misspelling. 'Creeper' is incorrect here. The sentence is corrected to a meaningful statement with proper adjectives and verbs.

× No, I don't 'cause I have a strong weird so I can keep writing.

✓ No, I don't because I have a strong will so I can keep writing.

'Weird' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'will'. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness.

× About just only topic.

✓ About just one topic.

The phrase 'just only' is redundant; 'just one' is more appropriate. Also, 'about' is acceptable here but the phrase is incomplete and needs to be part of a full sentence.

× And I think it is very important to write essays or reports. Becauses it become expensive.

✓ And I think it is very important to write essays or reports because it becomes essential.

'Becauses' should be 'because'. 'It become expensive' is incorrect; likely the intended meaning is 'it becomes essential' or 'important'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I prefer typing. Becauses I used to use my PC when I was at. High school students or.

✓ I prefer typing because I used to use my PC when I was in high school.

'Becauses' should be 'because'. 'When I was at. High school students or.' is fragmented and incorrect. It is corrected to a complete sentence with proper prepositions and structure.

× I I used to. Types up some was, so it is very quickly.

✓ I used to type up some work, so it is very quick.

'Types' should be 'type' to match the subject 'I'. 'Some was' is unclear and likely meant to be 'some work'. 'Quickly' is an adverb but 'quick' (adjective) fits better here to describe the process. The sentence is corrected accordingly.