写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“write quite open”和“writes on paper”。建议注意动词形式和表达的准确性，同时避免拼写错误，如“May”应为“me”。可以简洁明了地表达你的写作习惯。

示例: Yes, I write quite often in my daily life, but I usually don't write on paper. Instead, I use the notes app on my iPod or send messages because it's more convenient and faster for me.

建议: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议先明确表达你不喜欢写作的类型，然后说明你喜欢写什么和原因。避免拼写错误，如“assay”应为“essay”，并使用连贯的句子。

示例: Actually, I don't like writing a lot, such as essays or diaries, because they can be long and lonely. I prefer writing messages to my friends because we can have conversations.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“my suit and the opinion”。建议使用正确的词汇表达观点，并且句子结构要完整，逻辑清晰。

示例: I think the things I write will change over time because I will learn new information and have different experiences. My thoughts and opinions will change, so what I write today might be different from what I write in the future.

建议: 回答中有多处拼写和语法错误，如“hyping”应为“typing”，“heroes”应为“here”。建议注意拼写和语法，表达时要连贯，清楚说明你更喜欢打字的原因。

示例: I prefer typing rather than handwriting. I spend most of my time using a computer and keyboard, so typing on my laptop or smartphone is more convenient and faster, especially when I need to write something quickly in an emergency.

× Yes, I write quite open in my daily life, but I don't usually writes on paper.

✓ Yes, I write quite often in my daily life, but I don't usually write on paper.

这里的 'writes' 是第三人称单数形式，但主语是 'I'，应该用动词原形 'write'。另外，'quite open' 应为 'quite often'，表示频率。

× Instead I write the note application on my iPod to write a note or in message.

✓ Instead, I write notes using the note application on my iPod or in messages.

'write the note application' 结构不正确，应改为 'write notes using the note application'。'in message' 应为 'in messages'，表示在信息中。

× There is more convenient and faster for May.

✓ It is more convenient and faster for me.

句子缺少主语，'There is' 用法不当，应改为 'It is'。'May' 应为 'me'。

× Actually I don't like like writing a lot.

✓ Actually, I don't like writing a lot.

重复使用 'like' 是错误的，应去掉一个。

× Such as the assay or diary I fed ice pouring and quite a long quite lonely I just the right message to my friend.

✓ Such as essays or diaries, I feel it's boring and quite long and lonely, so I just write messages to my friends.

'assay' 应为 'essay'，'fed ice pouring' 是错误表达，应为 'feel it's boring'。句子结构混乱，需要调整。

× We talked law.

✓ We talk a lot.

'talked law' 是错误表达，应为 'talk a lot'，表示我们经常聊天。

× I think this thing I write to change over time.

✓ I think the things I write will change over time.

时态错误，表达未来变化应使用 'will change'。

× I will learn a new learning new information and have different experience.

✓ I will learn new information and have different experiences.

'a new learning new information' 结构错误，应简化为 'learn new information'。'experience' 应为复数 'experiences'。

× My suit and the opinion will change.

✓ My views and opinions will change.

'suit' 用词错误，应为 'views' 或 'ideas'，'the opinion' 应为复数 'opinions'。

× So I write today might be different from the Irish writing future.

✓ So what I write today might be different from what I write in the future.

'the Irish writing future' 是错误表达，应为 'what I write in the future'。

× I prefers hyping rather then.

✓ I prefer typing rather than handwriting.

主语是 'I'，动词应为原形 'prefer'。

× I prefers hyping rather then.

✓ I prefer typing rather than handwriting.

'then' 应为 'than'，表示比较。

× Handwriting heroes.

✓ Handwriting is harder.

'heroes' 用词错误，应为 'harder'，表示手写更难。

× I spend the rest of time using the computer and the keyboard.

✓ I spend most of my time using the computer and the keyboard.

'the rest of time' 用法不当，应为 'most of my time'。

× So typing in my laptop or smartphone a small convenience and faster.

✓ So typing on my laptop or smartphone is more convenient and faster.

缺少动词 'is'，'in' 应为 'on'，表示在设备上打字。

× Especialy in need to write down stands in emergency.

✓ Especially when I need to write down notes in an emergency.

'Especialy' 拼写错误，应为 'Especially'。句子结构不完整，需补充 'when I need to write down notes'。