写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯，存在语法错误和重复表达。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达。

示例: Not really. I prefer texting on my phone because it's more convenient. I can send messages anytime and anywhere, and easily correct mistakes if needed.

建议: 回答内容不清晰，表达混乱，缺乏具体细节。建议明确表达写作内容和原因，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

示例: When I was a student, I liked to write in my diary. For example, I would record my daily life and share interesting stories with my friends.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确，建议使用正确时态和词汇，清晰表达观点并提供具体对比。

示例: Yes, definitely. When I was a student, I preferred writing about love. But after graduation, I started writing more about my work, which is quite different from before.

建议: 回答中有发音和语法错误，表达不流畅。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并说明原因。

示例: I prefer typing because it's more convenient. I can quickly correct mistakes, whereas handwriting is more difficult for me.

× I prefer to text in my phone and text message instead of writing.

✓ I prefer texting on my phone and sending text messages instead of writing.

动词prefer后面接动名词形式，不能用不定式。这里应该用texting而不是to text。

× I prefer to text in my phone and text message instead of writing.

✓ I prefer texting on my phone and sending text messages instead of writing.

介词用错，应该用on my phone而不是in my phone。

× I can test uh in the forms any times, anywhere, and can if I found something wrong, I can revise it.

✓ I can text in the forms anytime, anywhere, and if I find something wrong, I can revise it.

any times应为anytime，表示任何时候。

× When I was a student, so I like to write on light.

✓ When I was a student, I liked to write at night.

描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时liked。

× I like to write on light.

✓ I like to write at night.

介词用错，表示时间点应使用at night。

× For example, I like a broke.

✓ For example, I like a book.

单词拼写错误，broke应为book。

× Oh just up one to record my daily life in inabraw can so to my friend.

✓ I just use it to record my daily life and share it with my friends.

句子结构混乱，需调整为正确表达。

× When I was a student, I prefer to rise something about love.

✓ When I was a student, I preferred to write something about love.

描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时preferred，且write拼写错误。

× But after my graduate, I like to write something about my work this totally different from the different age.

✓ But after I graduated, I like to write something about my work. This is totally different from when I was younger.

after my graduate应为after I graduated，且句子后半部分表达不清，需调整。

× I pipfa tapings because typing in the computers is more convenient for me.

✓ I prefer typing because typing on computers is more convenient for me.

拼写错误pipfa应为prefer，in the computers应为on computers。

× typing in the computers is more convenient for me.

✓ typing on computers is more convenient for me.

介词用错，应该用on computers。

× if I found something wrong, UM, if I.

✓ if I find something wrong.

条件句中表示一般现在时，不能用过去时found。

× if I. Use the handwritings maybe it's a difficult for me too.

✓ If I use handwriting, maybe it's difficult for me too.

handwritings应为不可数名词handwriting，a difficult应为difficult。