写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然且有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议用更自然的表达方式，避免语法错误，并且直接回答问题。

示例: No, I don't write a lot because I have graduated and currently don't have a job. I only write in my diary occasionally.

建议: 回答重复且没有直接回答喜欢写什么。建议直接回答喜欢写什么，并说明原因，避免重复。

示例: I like to write diary entries because it helps me reflect on my daily life and feelings.

建议: 回答内容不够具体且表达不清晰。建议用更具体的例子说明写作内容的变化，并使用连词使表达更连贯。

示例: Yes, the things I write will change. For example, when I was a student, I wrote essays and assignments, but in the future, I expect to write more work reports.

建议: 回答表达不够自然，有语法错误。建议用更自然的表达方式说明原因，并注意语法和连贯性。

示例: I prefer handwriting because I have severe myopia, so looking at screens for a long time makes me uncomfortable.

× No, because I graduated and I don't have a job or so now I just tried some diary.

✓ No, because I graduated and I don't have a job or so now I just try to write some diary.

这里的 'tried' 是过去式，但句子中描述的是现在的情况，应该用一般现在时 'try'。

× No, I don't write very often because I graduated and I don't have any jobs, so I just need to write some diary.

✓ No, I don't write very often because I graduated and I don't have a job, so I just need to write a diary.

'jobs' 应该用单数 'job' 因为这里指的是没有工作。'some diary' 应该用 'a diary'，因为 'diary' 是可数名词，表示一本日记本。

× Yes, For example, in the past I was a student, so I needed to finish a lot of a days.

✓ Yes, For example, in the past I was a student, so I needed to finish a lot of days.

'a lot of a days' 中 'a' 是多余的，正确用法是 'a lot of days'，表示许多天。

× In the future, I believe that I need to finish a lot of reports.

✓ In the future, I believe that I will need to finish a lot of reports.

表达将来时态时，'need' 前应加助动词 'will'，表示将来需要做某事。

× I pay for handwriting because I have high myopia which means watching the screen for long time I will feel uncomfortable.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I have high myopia which means watching the screen for a long time I will feel uncomfortable.

'pay for handwriting' 应为 'prefer handwriting'，表示偏好。'for long time' 应为 'for a long time'，需要加冠词 'a'。