写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强语法基础，尤其是单复数和时态的使用，同时注意句子结构的完整性和逻辑性。可以尝试简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和冗长。

示例: Yes, I write a lot because I am a junior student at university. Every week, my professor assigns me to write essays of about 1000 words on various topics.

建议: 回答中词汇使用不准确，句子结构混乱，建议多积累相关词汇，注意动词拼写和搭配，表达时要条理清晰，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I like to write short stories because they allow me to explore my imagination. I also enjoy writing funny jokes to share with my friends, which is very enjoyable.

建议: 回答不够清晰，逻辑混乱，建议先明确回答问题，然后用具体细节支持观点，注意句子连贯和语法正确。

示例: I think what I write has changed over time. Ten years ago, I might have written different things, but now I mainly write short stories and funny jokes because they make me happy and creative.

建议: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，建议先直接回答问题，再用具体理由支持，注意时态和词汇的准确使用，避免语法错误。

示例: I prefer typing when I write because during university, I mostly used computers. With technology developing rapidly, typing is faster and more convenient for me.

× Yes, because I'm a junior students and in my university my professor let me write the icy or some issues like every week.

✓ Yes, because I'm a junior student and in my university my professor lets me write the essay or some issues like every week.

这里'students'是复数形式，但主语是单数的'I'，应使用单数'student'。此外，动词'let'应根据主语'someone'的单数形式改为'lets'。

× Yes, because I'm a junior students and in my university my professor let me write the icy or some issues like every week.

✓ Yes, because I'm a junior student and in my university my professor lets me write the essay or some issues like every week.

主语是单数的'my professor'，动词应加-s，变为'lets'。

× So every week I need to write a I say about 1000 words.

✓ So every week I need to write an essay about 1000 words.

'I say'应为' essay'，且前面冠词'a'应改为'an'，因为' essay'以元音音素开头。

× For me, I prefer to ride like some of short stories to explore my imagination.

✓ For me, I prefer to write some short stories to explore my imagination.

'ride'应为'write'，'some of short stories'应为'some short stories'，去掉多余的'of'。

× Awesome funny jokes to talk my with my friends.

✓ Awesome funny jokes to talk with my friends.

'talk my with my friends'中'my'多余，应去掉。

× This is the abstract questions, but maybe about 10 years ago the things what I write maybe change, but in this period I just only want to say write some.

✓ This is an abstract question, but maybe about 10 years ago the things I wrote may have changed, but in this period I just only want to write some.

'questions'应为单数'an abstract question'，'what I write'应为'I wrote'，时态应为过去时，'maybe change'应为'may have changed'。

× This is the abstract questions, but maybe about 10 years ago the things what I write maybe change, but in this period I just only want to say write some.

✓ This is an abstract question, but maybe about 10 years ago the things I wrote may have changed, but in this period I just only want to write some.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时态。

× That makes me happy and makes me more creative.

✓ That makes me happy and makes me more creative.

该句无明显语法错误，无需修改。

× Actually I haven't right?

✓ Actually, I haven't written, right?

'haven't right'不完整，应为'haven't written, right?'，补全动词过去分词。

× Actually I haven't right? And for a long time, when I was in the university, most of time we use the computers and in this 2025 computers.

✓ Actually, I haven't written, right? And for a long time, when I was in university, most of the time we used computers, and in 2025 computers will be developing rapidly.

'use'应为过去时'used'，'in this 2025'应为'in 2025'，且句子时态应统一。

× Actually I haven't right? And for a long time, when I was in the university, most of time we use the computers and in this 2025 computers. A developing rapidly, so I preferred to use.

✓ Actually, I haven't written, right? And for a long time, when I was in university, most of the time we used computers, and in 2025 computers will be developing rapidly, so I prefer to use them.

'preferred'应为现在时'prefer'，'A developing rapidly'应为'are developing rapidly'，且句子结构需调整使其通顺。