写作— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you write a lot?
考生
Yes, I write quite a lot. It is a part of my study routine.
考官
What do you like to write? Why?
考生
Usually I like something that I want to memorize on my notebook because it is a good way to Remember Me.
考官
Do you think the things you write would change?
考生
Yes, I think it has completely changed. When I was young I wrote for study, but now I write something for my work.
考官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
考生
I prefer typing classes and writing down by hand because it's more convenient when I make a mistake. It is more easy erased.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
分数: 75.0建议: 回答は簡潔で直接的ですが、より自然で効果的にするために、なぜ書くことが学習の一部なのか具体的な理由を加えると良いでしょう。例えば、書くことが記憶の助けになるなどの説明を加えると、内容が豊かになります。
示例: Yes, I write quite a lot because it helps me remember important information and organize my thoughts during my studies.
What do you like to write? Why?
分数: 60.0建议: 文法と語彙の誤りがあり、意味が伝わりにくいです。'Remember Me'は不自然で、'help me remember'などの表現を使うべきです。また、具体的に何を書いているのか説明すると良いでしょう。
示例: Usually, I like to write down important facts or vocabulary in my notebook because it helps me remember them better.
Do you think the things you write would change?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答は内容が明確ですが、時制の一致や表現の自然さを改善すると良いです。例えば、'have completely changed'や'now I write things related to my work'などの表現を使うとより自然です。
示例: Yes, I think the things I write have completely changed. When I was young, I wrote mainly for studying, but now I write mostly for my work.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
分数: 50.0建议: 回答が混乱しており、'typing classes'は不適切な表現です。また、文法的な誤りもあります。どちらを好むかを明確にし、その理由を具体的に述べると良いでしょう。
示例: I prefer handwriting because it is easier to correct mistakes by erasing, and it helps me remember better than typing.
语法
× Usually I like something that I want to memorize on my notebook because it is a good way to Remember Me.
✓ Usually I like writing something that I want to memorize in my notebook because it is a good way to remember.
The verb 'like' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing preferences, so 'like something' is incorrect; it should be 'like writing something'. Also, 'Remember Me' is incorrect; it should be 'remember'. Additionally, 'on my notebook' should be 'in my notebook' (preposition correction).
× Yes, I think it has completely changed.
✓ Yes, I think it has completely changed.
No correction needed here; the sentence is grammatically correct in present perfect tense to indicate change over time.
× When I was young I wrote for study, but now I write something for my work.
✓ When I was young, I wrote for study, but now I write something for my work.
A comma is needed after 'When I was young' to separate the introductory clause. The phrase 'wrote for study' is acceptable but could be improved to 'wrote for studying' or 'wrote to study' for clarity, but it is not a strict grammar error.
× I prefer typing classes and writing down by hand because it's more convenient when I make a mistake.
✓ I prefer typing and writing by hand because it's more convenient when I make a mistake.
'Typing classes' is incorrect in this context; the student likely means 'typing'. Also, 'writing down by hand' is awkward; 'writing by hand' is correct. The conjunction 'and' is used correctly here.
× It is more easy erased.
✓ It is easier to erase.
'More easy' is incorrect; the comparative form of 'easy' is 'easier'. Also, 'erased' is the past participle, but here the infinitive 'to erase' is needed to express the ability to erase something.
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