写作— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you write a lot?
考生
Yes, definitely. I have to spend a significant amount of time day in and day out to write essays in order to fulfill my final dissertation before graduating from a university.
考官
What do you like to write? Why?
考生
I would say I prefer writing academic articles in journals because they require a variety of learning materials and on line resources. This process helps me to broaden my knowledge and develop my deep understanding of different topics.
考官
Do you think the things you write would change?
考生
Yes, definitely. I have recently changed several theories and hypotheses in my final dissertation. For instance, I am majoring in accounting and auditing in preparing final dissertation related to this industry. However, the accounting standards changed which caused me to modify several sentences in my dissertation.
考官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
考生
Well, I prefer both techniques. Handwriting can help me to avoid plagiarism and lick my mind clear about what I am going to write. By contrast, typing can save my time, especially when I study financial with theories from the university. I usually utilized this technique to write a short essay.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you write a lot?
分数: 75.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng hơi dài và có một số từ không tự nhiên như "day in and day out" trong ngữ cảnh này. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.
示例: Yes, I write quite a lot because I need to complete essays for my final dissertation before graduating from university.
What do you like to write? Why?
分数: 80.0建议: Bạn đã trả lời rõ ràng và có lý do cụ thể, tuy nhiên câu trả lời có thể tự nhiên hơn bằng cách tránh dùng cụm từ không chính xác như "on line resources" và câu hơi dài. Nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu ngắn gọn hơn.
示例: I prefer writing academic articles because researching various materials helps me expand my knowledge and understand topics more deeply.
Do you think the things you write would change?
分数: 78.0建议: Câu trả lời có nội dung tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu hơi rối và có lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
示例: Yes, my writing changes often. For example, since accounting standards were updated, I had to revise parts of my dissertation accordingly.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?
分数: 70.0建议: Bạn có ý tốt nhưng có lỗi từ vựng nghiêm trọng như "lick my mind clear" không đúng nghĩa. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và không mạch lạc. Bạn nên dùng từ vựng chính xác và câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn.
示例: I like both handwriting and typing. Handwriting helps me think clearly, while typing saves time, especially when writing short essays for my finance studies.
语法
× I have to spend a significant amount of time day in and day out to write essays in order to fulfill my final dissertation before graduating from a university.
✓ I have to spend a significant amount of time day in and day out writing essays in order to complete my final dissertation before graduating from university.
The phrase 'to write essays' should be changed to 'writing essays' to correctly express the continuous action of spending time on writing. Also, 'fulfill my final dissertation' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'complete' for finishing a dissertation. Additionally, 'graduating from a university' is better as 'graduating from university' because 'university' is used in a general sense here.
× I would say I prefer writing academic articles in journals because they require a variety of learning materials and on line resources.
✓ I would say I prefer writing academic articles in journals because they require a variety of learning materials and online resources.
The term 'on line' should be written as one word 'online' as it is a compound adjective describing 'resources'.
× I have recently changed several theories and hypotheses in my final dissertation.
✓ I have recently changed several theories and hypotheses in my final dissertation.
No correction needed here; the sentence is grammatically correct.
× However, the accounting standards changed which caused me to modify several sentences in my dissertation.
✓ However, the accounting standards have changed, which caused me to modify several sentences in my dissertation.
The verb tense should be present perfect 'have changed' to indicate a recent change affecting the present. Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to separate the clauses.
× Well, I prefer both techniques. Handwriting can help me to avoid plagiarism and lick my mind clear about what I am going to write.
✓ Well, I prefer both techniques. Handwriting can help me to avoid plagiarism and clear my mind about what I am going to write.
The phrase 'lick my mind clear' is incorrect and likely a misuse of idiom. The correct expression is 'clear my mind'.
× By contrast, typing can save my time, especially when I study financial with theories from the university.
✓ By contrast, typing can save me time, especially when I study finance with theories from the university.
The phrase 'save my time' should be 'save me time' as 'save someone time' is the correct collocation. Also, 'financial' is an adjective and should be replaced with the noun 'finance' to fit the context.
× I usually utilized this technique to write a short essay.
✓ I usually utilize this technique to write a short essay.
The adverb 'usually' indicates a habitual action, so the present tense 'utilize' should be used instead of the past tense 'utilized'.
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