写作— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、冗長な部分を避け、文を簡潔にまとめることが必要です。例えば、"explains Becauses"は意味不明なので削除し、過去の経験を具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

示例: Yes, I write quite often. When I was a child, I used to memorize things by writing them down, which helped me achieve good scores on my tests.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。より明確で自然な表現を使い、論理的なつながりを示す接続詞を活用し、具体的な理由や詳細を加えると良いでしょう。

示例: I like to write about my horse racing predictions. At first, I was not very good at focusing, but by writing down my process, I improved a lot. That's why I enjoy writing about it.

建议: 回答が非常に不明瞭で、文法的にも誤りが多いです。質問に対して直接的かつ明確に答え、理由を具体的に述べる練習が必要です。簡潔で論理的な文章構成を心がけましょう。

示例: No, I don't think the things I write will change much because my opinions and ideas remain quite consistent over time.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然で流暢な英語を使い、理由を明確に述べ、文を論理的に繋げることが重要です。

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because when I was a child, writing by hand helped me memorize information better, which led to good test scores. However, since I stopped writing by hand regularly, my skills have declined.

× It was great, explains Becauses.

✓ It was great, because it helped me.

The original sentence uses 'explains Becauses' which is incorrect and unclear. The sentence should use past tense to describe the experience and a proper conjunction 'because' to explain the reason.

× I got very nice score at every test at that time.

✓ I got very nice scores on every test at that time.

The word 'score' should be plural 'scores' because it refers to multiple tests. Also, the preposition 'at' should be 'on' when referring to tests.

× I like to light my prediction process about horse racing.

✓ I like to write my prediction process about horse racing.

The word 'light' is incorrect here; the intended verb is 'write' to express the act of recording predictions.

× When I started, I am very I was very bad at focused in.

✓ When I started, I was very bad at focusing.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly and uses 'focused in' which is not correct. The correct past tense verb 'was' should be used with the gerund 'focusing'.

× However, I started to write the process, I became very nice at it.

✓ However, after I started to write the process, I became very good at it.

The original sentence is a comma splice and uses 'nice' incorrectly. It should be two clauses connected properly and 'nice' replaced with 'good' to describe skill.

× No, I don't think so, because there's no changes about writing passed under.

✓ No, I don't think so, because there are no changes in my writing over time.

'There's' is singular but 'changes' is plural, so 'there are' is correct. Also, 'passed under' is incorrect and replaced with 'over time' to express duration.

× Now. Does my writing will never change last long?

✓ I think my writing will never change in the long term.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and awkward. The correct future tense structure is 'will never change' and the phrase 'in the long term' expresses duration.

× I prefer. Write by hand. Rather than typing.

✓ I prefer writing by hand rather than typing.

The original has sentence fragments. The corrected sentence combines the ideas into one coherent sentence.

× It was great experience be 'cause I got very nice score on every test at that time.

✓ It was a great experience because I got very nice scores on every test at that time.

The article 'a' is needed before 'great experience'. 'Be 'cause' is informal and incorrect; 'because' is correct. 'Score' should be plural 'scores'.

× However, since I stopped doing so, my squad got worse gradually.

✓ However, since I stopped doing so, my skill has gotten worse gradually.

'Squad' is incorrect; likely intended 'skill'. Also, present perfect 'has gotten' is appropriate to describe a change continuing to the present.