花— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more coherent and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and correct grammatical errors. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences for clarity.

示例: Yes, I love flowers and enjoy planting them at home. However, I dislike it when people pluck them. Sometimes, we buy flower pots from the market to add variety. I also enjoy taking photos of flowers because they are beautiful and refreshing.

建议: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Be more specific about your friend's interest in flowers.

示例: Yes, my best friend has a keen interest in flowers and always praises their beauty. Whenever she visits my home, especially on my birthday, she buys flowers as a present for me.

建议: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to organize your answer logically. Provide specific details about the location and types of flowers available nearby.

示例: No, there are not many flowers in my immediate area. However, about a 10-minute walk away, there is a large garden similar to a nursery where I can find many flowers. Whenever I need flowers, I usually go there to buy them.

建议: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Be more precise in expressing your thoughts about photography and flowers.

示例: Yes, I am interested in photography, so I often take pictures of flowers. I see flowers as symbols of freshness and beautiful creations of nature. I usually take photos daily and share them on Snapchat.

建议: Clarify your ideas and correct grammar mistakes. Use linking words to organize your answer logically. Provide specific examples of occasions when flowers are given in your country.

示例: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers on special occasions, but it depends on personal preferences. Some people dislike plucking flowers, while others give them at weddings, birthday parties, or use them for worship.

× I also like to plant some flowers at my home and I don't like to if any persons pluck the flowers.

✓ I also like to plant some flowers at my home and I don't like it if any person plucks the flowers.

The word 'persons' is incorrect here; the singular 'person' is more appropriate when referring to an unspecified individual. Also, 'pluck' should be in third person singular form 'plucks' to agree with 'person'.

× she always praise the flowers.

✓ she always praises the flowers.

The verb 'praise' must be in the third person singular form 'praises' to agree with the singular subject 'she'.

× Whenever she come at my home, especially on my birthday, she always buy some flowers for me as a present.

✓ Whenever she comes to my home, especially on my birthday, she always buys some flowers for me as a present.

The verbs 'come' and 'buy' must be in the third person singular forms 'comes' and 'buys' to agree with the singular subject 'she'. Also, the preposition 'at' should be 'to' when referring to going to a place.

× No, there is the no Lotus of flower in my area, but there is the far way from 10 minutes to walk.

✓ No, there are no lotuses in my area, but there is a place about 10 minutes away by walking.

'There is the no Lotus of flower' is incorrect; 'there are no lotuses' correctly uses plural and negation. Also, 'far way from 10 minutes to walk' is awkward; it should be 'a place about 10 minutes away by walking'.

× There is the there is the even large garden like a nursery and I see a number of flowers and whenever I need I mostly give reference to buy from that.

✓ There is even a large garden like a nursery where I see a number of flowers, and whenever I need, I usually refer people to buy from there.

The sentence has repetition and awkward phrasing. 'There is the there is the even large garden' is incorrect; it should be 'There is even a large garden'. Also, 'give reference to buy from that' is unclear; 'refer people to buy from there' is clearer.

× I'm informed of photography and that's why I I clicked many pictures of flowers.

✓ I'm interested in photography and that's why I have clicked many pictures of flowers.

'I'm informed of photography' is incorrect; 'I'm interested in photography' is correct. Also, 'clicked' should be in present perfect 'have clicked' to indicate experience up to now.

× it's a beautiful creations of the natures and I click the the photos daily basis and share on the Snapchat.

✓ They are beautiful creations of nature and I click photos daily and share them on Snapchat.

'it's a beautiful creations' mixes singular and plural; 'They are beautiful creations' is correct. 'the natures' should be 'nature'. 'the photos daily basis' should be 'photos daily'. 'share on the Snapchat' should be 'share them on Snapchat'.

× Yes, in my country center flowers on special cookies but it depends on the person.

✓ Yes, in my country people send flowers on special occasions but it depends on the person.

'center flowers on special cookies' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'people send flowers on special occasions'.

× Some persons don't like to pluck the flowers and some persons give the flowers on the wedding, on the birthday party and also some peoples use the flowers for the worship and it's depend on the.

✓ Some people don't like to pluck flowers and some people give flowers at weddings, birthday parties, and also some people use flowers for worship, and it depends on the person.

'persons' is better as 'people'. 'the wedding' and 'the birthday party' should be plural without 'the' when speaking generally. 'peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is the plural. 'it's depend' should be 'it depends'. Also, 'for the worship' should be 'for worship'. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected for clarity.