花— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语言较为自然，但存在语法和表达上的小错误，如“still fresh fragrance”应为“the fresh fragrance”，“always can remove”应调整语序。建议注意语法结构，避免冗余，简洁表达。

示例: Yes, I love flowers very much. I have planted many kinds in my garden, such as roses and tulips. Their fresh fragrance helps me relax and refresh my mind after a long day.

建议: 回答结构不够清晰，语法错误较多，如“since ** *** was very young”不明确，“when she grow up”应为“when she grew up”。建议简化句子，注意时态和表达的准确性。

示例: My mother has loved flowers since she was very young. She even opened a flower shop when she grew up and planted many different flowers in our garden. She enjoys the fragrance they bring.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“there has been planted”应为“there are many flowers planted”，“government indicates”应为“government indicates that”。建议使用更自然的表达，注意主谓一致和词汇搭配。

示例: Yes, there are many flowers planted along the streets in my community. The government believes that flowers add beauty to our environment and help freshen the air.

建议: 回答较为完整且自然，但部分表达略显重复，如“in my daily life”重复出现。建议适当简化句子，使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially in my mother's garden. I enjoy capturing how they look at different times of the day and in different seasons because their shapes change beautifully. It also helps me relax and refresh my mind.

建议: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“to send different kinds of flowers to various age group people”表达不自然，“and and romantic”重复。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，表达更准确。

示例: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others. Different flowers have different meanings, and many send tulips or roses to their loved ones to express true love and romance.

× While my mother is a truly flower enthusiast since ** *** was very young so actually she opened a flower shop when she grow up and also she planted a lot of flowers in our gardens with a variety.

✓ While my mother has been a true flower enthusiast since she was very young, she actually opened a flower shop when she grew up and also planted a variety of flowers in our garden.

句中“** ***”应为“she”，代词使用错误；“grow up”应为过去式“grew up”，时态错误；“a lot of flowers in our gardens with a variety”表达不自然，改为“a variety of flowers in our garden”更准确。

× While my mother is a truly flower enthusiast since ** *** was very young so actually she opened a flower shop when she grow up and also she planted a lot of flowers in our gardens with a variety.

✓ While my mother has been a true flower enthusiast since she was very young, she actually opened a flower shop when she grew up and also planted a variety of flowers in our garden.

“grow up”应使用过去式“grew up”，因为描述的是过去发生的动作。

× So actually she was satisfied by the fragrance bring to our.

✓ So actually she was satisfied by the fragrance brought to us.

句子结构不完整，“bring”应为过去分词“brought”，且“to our”应为“to us”，使句子完整且语法正确。

× Well, absolutely yes, there has been planted with a variety of flowers along the street side of our community.

✓ Well, absolutely yes, a variety of flowers have been planted along the street side of our community.

“there has been planted with”结构错误，应改为“a variety of flowers have been planted”，符合英语表达习惯。

× So basically the workers and the government indicates that flowers can always bring such beauty to our society and to make our air more fresh.

✓ So basically the workers and the government indicate that flowers can always bring such beauty to our society and make our air fresher.

“indicates”应为复数形式“indicate”，因为主语是复数；“our air more fresh”应改为“make our air fresher”，形容词比较级使用错误。

× So basically the workers and the government indicates that flowers can always bring such beauty to our society and to make our air more fresh.

✓ So basically the workers and the government indicate that flowers can always bring such beauty to our society and make our air fresher.

“more fresh”应使用比较级“fresher”，形容词比较级使用错误。

× There are a variety of meanings to send different kinds of flowers to various age group people.

✓ There are various meanings in sending different kinds of flowers to people of various age groups.

“various age group people”表达不自然，应改为“people of various age groups”，量词使用不当。

× So basically some people will send some tulips or roses to their lover to show their true love and and romantic.

✓ So basically some people will send tulips or roses to their lover to show their true love and romance.

“and romantic”用词错误，应为名词“romance”，形容词用法错误。