花— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够直接，且有语法错误和用词不当。建议直接表达自己是否喜欢花，并注意动词时态和拼写。

示例: I am not very sure if I love flowers, but I know my mom loves them a lot and she often plants many flowers in front of our house.

建议: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地介绍两个人喜欢花，并避免重复和错误。

示例: Yes, my mom and grandpa both love planting flowers. My grandpa even has a yard where he grows many flowers and vegetables.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议使用正确的时态和介词，清晰描述花的分布。

示例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. My mom plants a lot of them, and sometimes she puts flowers on the canteen table and in every room we have a small flower plant.

建议: 回答表达混乱，语法和词汇使用不当。建议简洁明了地表达不喜欢拍花的原因。

示例: No, I don't take photos of flowers because I am not very interested in photography and I don't like flowers very much.

建议: 回答不够流畅，存在重复和语法错误。建议用更自然的表达说明送花的习惯和场合。

示例: I'm not sure, but usually people send flowers to others during festivals or special holidays rather than on ordinary days.

× my mom loves flower very much

✓ my mom loves flowers very much

flower是可数名词，表示花朵，复数形式应为flowers。这里表示很多花，应该用复数形式。

× she prompt a lot of flowers in front of the gate of our home

✓ she plants a lot of flowers in front of the gate of our home

prompt不是动词的正确形式，应该用plant的第三人称单数形式plants，表示种植。

× she plants a lot of flowers in front of the the gate of my home and also my grandpa loves planting flowers too and she he has a yacht to plant a lot of a lot of flowers and vegetables

✓ she plants a lot of flowers in front of the gate of my home and also my grandpa loves planting flowers too and he has a yard to plant a lot of flowers and vegetables

the the是重复错误，应改为the；yacht（游艇）应为yard（院子）；a lot of重复，应去掉多余部分；she he代词混用，应改为he。

× My mom plant a lot of flowers and she all sometimes put some flowers in on the table of canteen and also in each room we have a little plant of flower

✓ My mom plants a lot of flowers and she sometimes puts some flowers on the table of the canteen and also in each room we have a little plant of flowers

mom是第三人称单数，动词应加s；put应为puts；on the table前不需要in；canteen前应加定冠词the；plant of flower应为plant of flowers，flower应为复数。

× she all sometimes put some flowers in on the table of canteen

✓ she sometimes puts some flowers on the table of the canteen

in on是重复使用，应去掉in，只用on；canteen前应加定冠词the。

× in each room we have a little plant of flower

✓ in each room we have a little plant of flowers

flower应为复数flowers，表示多种花。

× she he has a yacht to plant a lot of a lot of flowers and vegetables

✓ he has a yard to plant a lot of flowers and vegetables

she he代词混用，应统一为he；yacht应为yard。

× I don't I think I'm not very like flowers

✓ I don't think I like flowers very much

句子结构混乱，I don't和I think重复，应合并；like后面不加very，very修饰like应放在前面。

× not I'm not hate or dislike, just just don't like

✓ I don't hate or dislike them, I just don't like them

hate和dislike后面需要宾语，缺少them；句子缺少主语I。

× Usually you see someone send the flowers to to others

✓ Usually you see someone send flowers to others

the flowers前不需要定冠词the；to to重复，应去掉一个to。