花— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, say "I love flowers, especially peonies because they smell nice and help me relax. They also look beautiful in my room."

示例: I love flowers, especially peonies because they have a pleasant fragrance that helps me reduce stress. They also brighten up my room and make it look more inviting.

建议: In English (Cambodia), focus on using correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. For example, say "Yes, my mom loves flowers. She often buys peonies for herself and me when she comes home from work because of their lovely scent."

示例: Yes, my mom loves flowers. She often buys peonies for herself and me when she comes home from work because they smell wonderful.

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. For example, say "Yes, there are many flowers in my area. My yard has several flowers, and there are also flower shops nearby."

示例: Yes, there are many flowers around where I live. My yard has several flowers, and there are flower shops in my neighborhood as well.

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to use smoother sentences and correct grammar. For example, say "Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I adore them. Looking at these photos in my gallery makes me feel happy."

示例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I really like them. Whenever I see beautiful flowers, I take pictures, and looking at these photos later makes me feel good.

建议: In English (Cambodia), try to express ideas more clearly and avoid hesitation. For example, say "Not really. In my country, people don't often send flowers to each other. However, in my family, we send flowers to show love and care."

示例: Not really. In my country, people usually don't send flowers to each other often. But in my family, we send flowers to express our love and care for one another.

× I adore so much to flower that have like a good smell like Peony.

✓ I adore flowers that have a good smell like Peonies.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because you are talking about flowers in general. Also, 'have' is correct for plural, and 'Peony' should be plural 'Peonies' to match the plural noun. In English, when talking about more than one item, use plural forms.

× They have a lot of smell that is can help me reduce my stress and it also look good when you take it to the core like your room.

✓ They have a strong smell that can help me reduce my stress and they also look good when you take them to the core like your room.

'A lot of smell' is incorrect; 'a strong smell' or 'a lot of scent' is better. 'Is can' is incorrect; use 'can' alone. 'It also look' should be 'they also look' because 'they' refers to plural 'flowers'. 'Take it' should be 'take them' to match plural. The sentence needs plural agreement.

× my mom also love flowers.

✓ my mom also loves flowers.

In present simple tense, third person singular subjects like 'my mom' require the verb to have an 's' ending, so 'love' becomes 'loves'. This is subject-verb agreement.

× She always bought flowers when she come back umm come back home from work.

✓ She always buys flowers when she comes back home from work.

The sentence talks about habitual action, so present simple tense is appropriate: 'always buys' and 'she comes back'. 'Bought' and 'come' are inconsistent tenses here.

× She always buy peonies for me and for herself because of the smell.

✓ She always buys peonies for me and for herself because of the smell.

For third person singular subjects like 'she', the verb in present simple must have 's' ending: 'buys' instead of 'buy'.

× Yeah, there's a lot of flower in my area.

✓ Yeah, there are a lot of flowers in my area.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because 'a lot of' refers to multiple items. Also, 'there's' (there is) is singular, but 'flowers' is plural, so use 'there are'.

× My, my, my yard also have flowers and in my ear in my area also have like flower shop.

✓ My yard also has flowers and in my area there is also a flower shop.

'Yard' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. 'Ear' is likely a typo for 'area'. 'Flower shop' is singular, so use 'a flower shop'. Also, 'have like flower shop' is incorrect; better to say 'there is a flower shop'.

× That's a lot.

✓ There are a lot.

'That's' means 'that is' which is singular, but the context implies plural, so 'There are a lot' is better. However, this sentence is incomplete and could be improved further.

× I am the person that adore to flowers.

✓ I am the person that adores flowers.

'Adore' is a verb that does not require 'to' after it. Also, for third person singular 'that' (referring to 'person'), the verb should be 'adores'. No '-ing' form needed here.

× So whenever I saw the flowers I always take photo of of it and it when I looking for the gallery it's made me feel good.

✓ So whenever I see flowers, I always take photos of them and when I look at the gallery, it makes me feel good.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Saw' should be 'see' for habitual action. 'Take photo of of it' should be 'take photos of them' (plural and correct pronoun). 'When I looking' should be 'when I look'. 'It's made me' should be 'it makes me' for present tense.

× because in my country it feel like they don't focus too much on sending flower to each other.

✓ because in my country it feels like they don't focus too much on sending flowers to each other.

'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'feels' not 'feel'. 'Sending flower' should be 'sending flowers' because 'flowers' is plural here.