花— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear opinion about flowers and explain your feelings with simple, correct sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

示例: I like flowers because of their beautiful colors and pleasant smells. However, sometimes I don't pay much attention to them because I am busy.

建议: Your answer is confusing and has many mistakes. Please try to answer directly and clearly, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Add linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: Yes, my friend loves flowers. She is very good at planting many kinds of flowers in her garden.

建议: Your answer is understandable but needs better sentence structure and linking words. Try to combine your ideas into one or two clear sentences.

示例: Yes, there are many flowers near where I live because there is a market that sells trees and flowers close to my house.

建议: Your answer is clear but can be improved by combining sentences and using linking words for fluency.

示例: No, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life because I don't enjoy taking photos very much.

建议: Your answer has some good ideas but contains grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

示例: No, people in my country don't often send flowers to each other. However, they sometimes do, especially on Valentine's Day when they give roses or other beautiful flowers.

× For me, I'm leader. Like nor hate flowers.

✓ For me, I'm a leader. I neither like nor hate flowers.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and lacks articles. 'I'm leader' should be 'I'm a leader' to include the indefinite article. 'Like nor hate flowers' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I neither like nor hate flowers' to properly use the negative conjunction.

× Sometimes a leg it because of.

✓ Sometimes I avoid them because of that.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Sometimes a leg it because of' does not form a proper sentence. It likely intends to express avoidance, so 'Sometimes I avoid them because of that' is a clearer and grammatically correct sentence.

× Their smells an the appearance but sometime I don't have an interest about him so.

✓ Their smell and appearance are nice, but sometimes I am not interested in them.

'Their smells an the appearance' should be 'Their smell and appearance'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'I don't have an interest about him' is incorrect; it should be 'I am not interested in them' to correctly use pronouns and prepositions.

× Yes, I know someone who loved flowers.

✓ Yes, I know someone who loves flowers.

The question is in present tense, so the verb should be 'loves' to match the subject 'someone' in present tense, not 'loved' which is past tense.

× She is my end an she planned.

✓ She is my friend and she plants.

'End an she planned' is unclear and likely a typo. It should be 'friend' and 'plants' to make a meaningful sentence.

× Very good at planting she plan.

✓ She is very good at planting; she plans many kinds of flowers.

The original sentence lacks proper structure and verb agreement. Adding 'She is' and correcting 'plan' to 'plans' improves clarity and grammar.

× How many kinds of flowers?

✓ How many kinds of flowers does she plant?

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a verb. Adding 'does she plant' completes the question properly.

× Yes, there are a lot of flowers near. Where I live.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers near where I live.

The sentence is split incorrectly. Combining the two parts into one sentence improves flow and correctness.

× Because there is a market for selling trees and flower near my house.

✓ Because there is a market selling trees and flowers near my house.

'For selling' is incorrect; 'selling' is sufficient. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'trees'.

× No, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life.

✓ No, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Because I don't enjoy that much about taking photo of anything.

✓ Because I don't enjoy taking photos of anything that much.

The phrase 'enjoy that much about taking photo of anything' is awkward. Correcting to 'enjoy taking photos of anything that much' improves grammar and clarity.

× No, for me, I think people in my country don't send forward to each other that much.

✓ No, for me, I think people in my country don't send flowers to each other that much.

'Send forward' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'send flowers'. Correcting this fixes the meaning and grammar.

× But. They sent flowers sometimes.

✓ But they send flowers sometimes.

The question is about habitual action, so present tense 'send' is appropriate instead of past tense 'sent'.

× For example if is a Valentine day, they will give a rose or auto flower that beautiful to each other.

✓ For example, if it is Valentine's Day, they will give a rose or a beautiful flower to each other.

'If is a Valentine day' lacks subject 'it'. 'Auto flower' is unclear; replaced with 'a beautiful flower'. Added articles 'a' and possessive form 'Valentine's Day' for correctness.