花— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you love flowers?
考生
I love flower. I love you. Today, more flowers. This mean the same that loops of the flowers are mesmerising. Aye. For every occasion I use flower, I love to keep flower with me. I love to preserve them. I love gardening. Flower dies.
考官
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
考生
Yes, my mother loves flowers. She loves gardening. Whenever it's blooms, flower. She likes to preserve them or taking pictures now and then. Recently we had it's sweet, beautiful in our veranda and she keep taking photos of that.
考官
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
考生
I live in Bangladesh so here is a lots of flower, especially in summer. We can see 5 green colors around us. Heading there in winters there also many kinds of flowers like jump from only cash sunflower. In summer there is you lose yellow flower.
考官
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
考生
I love flowers so I keep taking photos of flowers. Whenever I see a beautiful and vibrant looking flower, I keep a photograph of that I'll find displeasing and very mesmerizing. I feel peace after seeing the photos I took earlier.
考官
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
考生
I think people in my country, especially young generation, same flower to each other, but I don't see many older people. In my family specially they don't change flower to each other for younger son, they do because of their loves, anniversary etc.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you love flowers?
分数: 40.0建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response to the question with a clear topic sentence, followed by supporting details using linking words. Avoid irrelevant or confusing sentences. Use correct singular/plural forms and simple, natural expressions.
示例: Yes, I love flowers very much. They are beautiful and bring me happiness. For example, I enjoy gardening and often keep fresh flowers at home for decoration.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
分数: 55.0建议: Your answer is relevant but some sentences are incomplete or unclear. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas. Try to be more specific and correct grammar mistakes, such as verb forms and articles.
示例: Yes, my mother loves flowers and gardening. Whenever the flowers bloom, she takes pictures and preserves them. Recently, we had beautiful flowers in our veranda, and she kept taking photos of them.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
分数: 35.0建议: Your answer is confusing and contains many grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct answer with specific details. Use correct plural forms and linking words to make your answer logical and natural.
示例: Yes, there are many flowers where I live in Bangladesh, especially in summer. We can see different kinds of flowers like sunflowers and yellow flowers during this season. Even in winter, some flowers bloom in my area.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
分数: 60.0建议: Your answer is mostly clear but some sentences are awkward and contradictory. Avoid saying 'displeasing' if you mean the opposite. Use linking words to connect ideas and express your feelings clearly.
示例: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I love them. Whenever I see a beautiful and vibrant flower, I take a picture. Looking at these photos makes me feel peaceful and happy.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
分数: 45.0建议: Your answer has unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Use correct verbs and clearer expressions. Provide specific examples and use linking words to improve coherence.
示例: I think people in my country, especially the younger generation, often send flowers to each other. However, older people do this less often. In my family, we usually give flowers on special occasions like anniversaries or to show love.
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