地理— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在错误，建议练习用完整句子表达观点，并且避免重复和断断续续的表达。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体原因支持。

示例: I didn't like geography when I was in junior high school because I found it hard to understand directions and maps.

建议: 回答中有很多语法错误和词汇使用不当，建议多练习表达观点时的句子结构，使用正确的词汇，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps us understand weather forecasts and natural disasters, which can protect our lives.

建议: 回答中句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议练习用完整句子表达经历和感受，并用连接词使内容连贯。

示例: Yes, I have studied geography for six years from junior high to high school. I find it interesting but sometimes a little difficult to understand.

建议: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达错误较多。建议先直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子说明原因，避免无关或混乱的内容。

示例: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because my major is business administration, which is very different from geography.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议用完整句子表达兴趣和原因，并注意词汇的准确使用。

示例: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries because I am curious and it is important for my future job.

× I didn't like geographies, things.

✓ I didn't like geography.

这里的geography是不可数名词，不能用复数形式geographies。应使用单数形式。

× Becauses I couldn't recognize the. Direction like. And the.

✓ Because I couldn't recognize directions well.

句子结构混乱，断句错误。应合并为完整句子，且direction应为复数directions，表示方向。

× Yes, I think Jennifer is very useful because it's a basic subject an drove office can. Is useful for our life.

✓ Yes, I think geography is very useful because it's a basic subject and is useful for our life.

原句中Jennifer显然是误用，应为geography。句子中断句错误，且an drove office can无意义，应删除。

× Such as the weather forecast. Or some other full cost to pre protect us from being natural.

✓ Such as the weather forecast or other ways to protect us from natural disasters.

full cost to pre protect用词错误，应为ways to protect。being natural应为natural disasters，表示自然灾害。

× Yes, I have learned geography it for six years from junior high school to high school, I think is interesting, but.

✓ Yes, I have learned geography for six years from junior high school to high school. I think it is interesting, but...

句子中have learned后不需要it，且句子应分为两句。

× I tried to. Learn it but I feel to do.

✓ I tried to learn it but I found it difficult.

原句表达不完整且不通顺，feel to do用法错误，应改为found it difficult表示感到困难。

× Of course not, because my major is business administration is. Is heaven. Similarity of geography. Put.

✓ Of course not, because my major is business administration, which is quite different from geography.

句子结构混乱，heaven应为different，similarity用法错误，应表达专业不同。

× I will learn some sort of knowledge in the future.

✓ I will learn some knowledge in the future.

some sort of knowledge表达冗余，简化为some knowledge更自然。

× Yes, because the job is very important for every Chinese. In.

✓ Yes, because the job is very important for every Chinese person.

句子末尾的In无意义，应删除。

× I like to learning and I have I am curious about the geography of mice countries.

✓ I like learning and I am curious about the geography of my countries.

like后接动词应用动词原形或动名词，to learning错误，应为learning。mice countries应为my countries。

× I will learn more about the geography of my countries.

✓ I will learn more about the geography of my country.

my countries应为my country，表示“我的国家”，单数形式。