名字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cavabınızda daha aydın və təbii ifadələr istifadə edin. Məsələn, "My name means 'shining of the sun', which I really like because it sounds positive and bright." kimi sadə və aydın cümlələr qurun. Həmçinin, təkrarlardan qaçın və fikrinizi daha səlis ifadə edin.

示例: My name means 'shining of the sun', which I really like because it sounds positive and bright. Although it doesn't have a special story behind it, I feel proud of its meaning.

建议: Cümlələrinizi daha düzgün qrammatik quruluşda ifadə edin və fikirlərinizi daha aydın şəkildə təqdim edin. Məsələn, "I prefer meaningful names and usually people in Azerbaijan name their daughters after their grandparents." kimi ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Həmçinin, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edərək fikirlərinizi birləşdirin.

示例: I prefer meaningful names for my children. In Azerbaijan, many people choose names of their grandparents for their daughters, which I think is a nice tradition.

建议: Cümlələrinizi daha təbii və qrammatik cəhətdən düzgün qurun. Məsələn, "No one in my family has the same name as me. I think there are many names to choose from, so it's not necessary to have the same name." kimi ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Təkrarlardan və qarışıqlıqdan qaçın.

示例: No one in my family has the same name as me. I believe there are plenty of names to choose from, so it's not important to share the same name.

建议: Suala birbaşa cavab verin və mövzunu qarışdırmayın. Məsələn, "I am not sure about Chinese naming traditions, but in Azerbaijan, people used to choose names from old films in the past, which is different from now." kimi ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qısa saxlayın.

示例: I don't know much about Chinese naming customs. However, in Azerbaijan, people used to choose names from old movies in the past, which is different from how they choose names now.

建议: Cavabınızı mövzuya uyğun və aydın edin. Məsələn, "I don't know much about popular names in China, but in Azerbaijan, many people have common names like Kalish. I prefer unique and meaningful names." kimi ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Təkrarlardan qaçın və fikirlərinizi daha səlis ifadə edin.

示例: I am not familiar with popular names in China. However, in Azerbaijan, names like Kalish are very common, but I prefer to choose unique and meaningful names for my children.

× I'm general and the meaning of my name is shining of sun.

✓ I'm general and the meaning of my name is shining of the sun.

The phrase 'shining of sun' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'sun' because 'sun' is a unique noun and requires 'the' to specify it.

× Like I like some, I like the shining of some.

✓ Like I like some, I like the shining of the sun.

The word 'some' is incorrect here; it should be 'sun' to match the intended meaning. Also, 'the shining of the sun' is the correct phrase.

× We know that there are so strange names, but I don't like them.

✓ We know that there are some strange names, but I don't like them.

The word 'so' is incorrectly used instead of 'some' to indicate an unspecified number of names.

× Of course, some of them is cool, some of them has a nice meaning, but some of them is so meaningless and I don't like them.

✓ Of course, some of them are cool, some of them have a nice meaning, but some of them are so meaningless and I don't like them.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'some of them' is plural, so the verbs should be 'are' and 'have' instead of 'is' and 'has'.

× Even in Azerbaijan, most people choose their daughter name for their grandma or grandpa.

✓ Even in Azerbaijan, most people choose their daughter's name after their grandma or grandpa.

The phrase 'daughter name' should be possessive 'daughter's name' and 'for' should be replaced with 'after' to indicate naming in honor of grandparents.

× No, there is no anybody same name as me.

✓ No, there is nobody with the same name as me.

'No anybody' is incorrect; 'nobody' is the correct pronoun. Also, 'same name as me' needs the preposition 'with' to be grammatically correct.

× No, there is no anybody same name as me.

✓ No, there is nobody with the same name as me.

The preposition 'with' is necessary after 'nobody' to correctly link to 'the same name as me'.

× And I don't like like these stations because I think that there are so many names and you can choose out of name for your children, it doesn't matter.

✓ And I don't like these situations because I think that there are so many names and you can choose any name for your children, it doesn't matter.

'Stations' is incorrect; the intended word is 'situations'. Also, 'choose out of name' is incorrect; it should be 'choose any name'.

× Yeah, there are many difference between between now and in the past, because in the past people prefer choosing the names from their from their old film, but not like, but not.

✓ Yeah, there are many differences between now and the past, because in the past people preferred choosing names from their old films, but not like now.

'Difference' should be plural 'differences' to match 'many'. 'Prefer' should be past tense 'preferred' to match past time. 'Film' should be plural 'films'. The sentence is also clarified for meaning.

× Yeah, there are so many Kalish names here and they are so popular.

✓ Yeah, there are so many Kalish names here and they are very popular.

No plural error here, but 'so popular' is acceptable; 'very popular' is a stylistic improvement. No correction strictly needed.