名字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer needs to be more natural and clear. Avoid filler words like 'uh uh' and clarify your points with correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, explain the meaning of your name clearly and why your father chose it.

示例: Yes, my father gave me my name. My family name is Chain, and my given name is Siri. He chose this name because he hopes I will be a thoughtful and virtuous person.

建议: Try to avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, be more specific about why you like ancient poems for names.

示例: I would choose names from dictionaries or ancient Chinese poems because these poems are beautiful and elegant. Moreover, they often have meaningful and suitable meanings for names.

建议: Avoid repeating words like 'wants wants' and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. Also, correct pronoun usage and sentence structure will help.

示例: Yes, one of my nephews has the same name as me. My sister chose my name for her daughter because she hopes her daughter can be like me, as I am a role model for her.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Please complete your sentences and use linking words to compare past and present naming habits clearly. Also, avoid grammatical errors like 'huge difference' (should be 'huge differences').

示例: Yes, there are huge differences between how Chinese name their children now and in the past. For example, the last generation liked to use simple words for their children's names, but nowadays people prefer more unique and meaningful names.

建议: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve pronunciation and word choice ('worlds' should be 'words'). Also, provide clearer examples and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

示例: Yes, in some regions, people prefer certain names more than others. For example, in Guangdong, people often choose 'Joshing' as a girl's name and 'Charging' as a boy's name for their children.

× Yes, my father give me my name and mine Chinese name is Chancery, chain is my family's name and Siri is my uh uh given name.

✓ Yes, my father gives me my name and my Chinese name is Chancery, Chain is my family's name and Siri is my given name.

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'my father'. Also, 'mine' is incorrect here; it should be 'my'.

× So my father think I should be a thoughtful and a virtual person.

✓ So my father thinks I should be a thoughtful and a virtuous person.

The verb 'think' should be 'thinks' to agree with the singular subject 'my father'. Also, 'virtual' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'virtuous'.

× Maybe I will choose their names from the dictionaries or some ancient poems.

✓ Maybe I would choose their names from dictionaries or some ancient poems.

Using 'would' here expresses a hypothetical or future possibility more appropriately than 'will'. Also, 'the dictionaries' should be 'dictionaries' without 'the' because it refers to dictionaries in general.

× I think some Chinese poems are very beautiful and elegant and they have them a beautiful meanings which is suit board to be given as a name.

✓ I think some Chinese poems are very beautiful and elegant and they have beautiful meanings which are suitable to be given as names.

'Them' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Meanings' is plural, so 'is' should be 'are'. 'Suit board' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'suitable'. Also, 'name' should be plural 'names' to match 'meanings'.

× Yes, one of my nephews has the same name as me and my sister gave her my name because my sister wants wants her daughter to be a girl like me and she said to me as a role model for her daughter.

✓ Yes, one of my nephews has the same name as me and my sister gave her my name because she wants her daughter to be a girl like me and she said I am a role model for her daughter.

The repeated 'wants' is a typo. 'My sister wants wants her daughter' should be 'she wants her daughter'. 'She said to me as a role model' is incorrect; it should be 'she said I am a role model'.

× Yes, there are huge difference between the Chinese name now, nowadays and it used to be.

✓ Yes, there are huge differences between Chinese names now, nowadays and how they used to be.

'Difference' should be plural 'differences' to agree with 'are'. 'Chinese name' should be plural 'Chinese names'. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× For example the last generation like to use a simple world as the their children's name, but in our days people.

✓ For example, the last generation liked to use a simple word as their children's name, but nowadays people...

'World' is incorrect; it should be 'word'. 'Like' should be past tense 'liked' to match 'last generation'. 'The their' is redundant; 'their' alone is correct. 'In our days' is better expressed as 'nowadays'. The sentence is incomplete but corrected as far as possible.

× Yes, uh, in some regions people prefer some specific worlds than others.

✓ Yes, uh, in some regions people prefer some specific words to others.

'Worlds' is incorrect; it should be 'words'. The correct preposition after 'prefer' when comparing is 'to', not 'than'.

× For example in Guangdong people like to use joshing as a girls name for their next generation and charging as the boy's name.

✓ For example, in Guangdong people like to use Joshing as a girl's name for their next generation and Charging as the boy's name.

'Girls' should be possessive singular 'girl's' to modify 'name'. Also, proper nouns like 'Joshing' and 'Charging' should be capitalized.